I left writing for a lot of reasons but Im back with a new mentality. I want people to know this: From now on I write for me again and my oc submitters who were and are bored and read this to pass the time.
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BMS:(Background Music Start)
BME(Background Music End)
Theme songs and other songs are below this:
Opening: Remix Maniacs - "JUSTICE LEAGUE" [Trap Remix!]
Avant - Read Your Mind
Faith Evans - I Love You
Ending: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09
INT. LOCATION DAY
FADE IN:
Galactic League HQ, R and D Sector...A stereotypical secret facility-looking room with people in lab coats working together on different gadgets and inventions. Here is where our group of heroes and heroines are being giving a tour by their leaders...
SPIDER-MAN
(Looking around in amazement)
Woah!
NESS
(Smirks)
Not bad, huh? Now over there, kids.
The adults within this group glare at Ness with intense hate...
NESS
(Sweatdrops expression)
And ladies and gentlemens.
IRON WOMAN
(Annoyed)
This is our leader?
THOR
(Annoyed)
Yeah he got lucky, right, Super Woman?
SUPER WOMAN
Yeah...
She feels many conflicting thoughts when it comes to the hero...
SUPER WOMAN
(Thinking to herself)
Is this boy such a problem that Kal El would attempt to kill him?
ROCKET
(Calm while his hands rest on the back of his head)
I don't know what the fuss is about. He seems like the type to roll with the flow.
ZARA
(Smiles)
And not just that. He's apparently a great teacher too, so he'll probably erase a lot of your weaknesses. That's one thing about Ness, he not only a balances out, he excels. And seeing as Toji and Red Fiend trained with him, I'm pretty sure they're a whole lot stronger than before.
IRON WOMAN
Please, he wishes he was any good.
ZARA
(Thinking to herself)
Ness has his hands full. But then again, we all do as well.
Meanwhile, the leaders chat amongst themselves...
RED FIEND
(Curious expression)
How's your teams looking?
NESS
(Annoyed)
A lot of training will be needed, especially mentally. You guys?
TOJI
(Smirks)
I'm pretty much good, its just going to be utilizing and improving. And with Sis, it'll be even easier.
RED FIEND
(Nods while keeping a calm demeanor)
Same boat as Ness, everyone except Zara is a lone wolf. And you already know the 4 "Addults" have a hard on for us.
Later, as the group stands in front of what appears to be a big door that's opened to reveal a huge space craft with 3 huge rocket ships attached to it.
BATMAN
(Calm yet serious)
As you can see, this version of what is known as your watchtower, has 3 smaller ship, each being ready for emergency situations. These ships need to come back every 3 months for refuels. Also, the ship will have a A.I. while the 3 navigators lead the other 3 ships.
TOJI
(Understanding)
So, one ship holds the main unit while the other 3 have a mini units that connect to the main.
BATMAN
Precisely.
NESS
(Curious)
And who-
A loud alarm goes off
NESS
Hmm...
A hologram appears showing the city of Metropolis being attacked by a giant being...
MS MARVEL
(Horrified by the destruction)
What's that?
WONDER WOMAN
(Serious)
Metropolis is in danger.
BATMAN
(Realizing something)
Darkseid...
NESS
(Smirks)
Cool, Toji, Rojo you're with me, everyone else enjoy the show.
The 3 nod with a smirk...
WONDER WOMAN
(Shocked)
What?
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked)
Are you insane? This is Darkseid, a New God. Even my cousin struggles against him!
NESS
Awww you've worried.
SUPER WOMAN
(Thinking to herself in anger)
I can't stand this boy.
WONDER WOMAN
(Concerned)
Can you win?
NESS
(Shrugs)
Who knows?
Ness looks at everyone under his order including the adults...
NESS
(Smirks)
But I think its about time, our teams see their leaders in action.
Ness feels someone looking at him...
RAVEN
(Telepathically communicating to Ness)
Beat him.
NESS
(Telepathically communicating back)
No prob, I got this.
ZARA
Go, guys, show us what The JLG can do.
TOJI,RED FIEND, AND NESS
Bet.
With that, the Kill City Trio walk out of the area...
SUPER WOMAN
(Concerned)
Hey, are you really letting them go?
BATMAN
Once they get like this they, even I can't stop them.
Back to the Kill City Trio as they run into Metropolis...
NESS
(Smirks)
Ight my bros, lets try to keep it level one.
TOJI
(Concerned)
You know she's gonna get mad right? She'll probably even put you on the couch.
RED FIEND
(Calm)
Yeah bro and considering you're horny ass self, you probably do not wanna do that.
NESS
Don't worry about it and I'm not a horn dog you assholes.
They look at Ness with blank stares and expressions...
NESS
(Annoyed)
Hey!
CUT TO:
BMS: Remix Maniacs - JUSTICE LEAGUE [Trap Remix!]
bryf963 Presents…
Justice League Galactic
A Fanfiction Written by…
Fo$t Da Writer
Original Characters by…
Fo$T Da Writer
XxTributomxX
Red Fiend
Starring…
Ness
Raven
Zara Larson
Toji Chan
Red Fiend
White Tiger
Super Woman
Iron Woman
Rocket
Thor
Static Shock
Spider-Man
Ms. Marvel
Batman Beyond
Wild Dog
Also Starring
Nature Girl
Wonder Woman
Batman
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Justice League Galactic
BME:
INT. DAY
In one of Metropolis's biggest parks, a little girl is almost killed by a boulder falling from the sky, until Toji and Ness break it away into small pieces with kicks.
LITTLE GIRL
(Smiles)
Thanks misters.
TOJI
(Smiles)
No prob.
As the little girl leaves, she sticks her tongue out at Darkseid...
NESS
(Smirks)
Looks like you're not well liked.
DARKSEID
(Intrigued)
And just who would you 3 be?
RED FIEND
(Serious expression)
Just some heroes. So why are you here, Darkseid?
DARKSEID
(Calm)
With Superman gone, I figure its time to take over this pathetic planet.
NESS
(Thinking to himself out loud)
Wow, maybe Batman was right, kicking Superman's ass was the wr- Na I'd do it again.
DARKSEID
(Shocked yet calm)
You beat Superman?
NESS
(Smirks)
True story. So you might wanna wait a few hunnid years before you try this planet bruh.
DARKSEID
(Frowns)
You dare defy a God?
NESS
Name may be Ness, but I am known as God-Ness to many. Rojo, Toji?
RED FIEND AND TOJI
(Serious)
Ready.
DARKSEID
(Watching them get into fighting stances)
Then test your might and die.
Red Fiend and Toji stay behind as Ness goes in for a punch to Darkseid's gut...
DARKSEID
(Blocks Ness's fist)
Pa-ugh!
Toji at almost in human speeds, spun his body to unleash a unleash a tornado roundhouse kick to Darkseid's head
TOJI
(The kick unleashes a powerful impact)
Kumite Nuke!
SPIDER-MAN AND STATIC
(Watching on the hologram tv as Darkseid is sent flying)
Lit!
ZARA
(Cheering)
Get him, Toji.
WONDER WOMAN
(Smiles)
Seems Toji's even stronger now.
Darkseid hits the ground but easily stands feeling only small damage from the kick...
DARKSEID
Not bad, for a human.
But unfortunately for Darkseid, a mine blows up behind him causing him to move forward unexpectedly as he looks back...
DARKSEID
(Shock as he looks back to only see two)
What?
Just then, Darkseid feels a strong metal fist at his chin...
NESS
Aaaah!
Wait did he just do a Shoryu-
NESS
(Landing after sending Darkseid into the air)
Rojo.
RED FIEND
(Aiming a RPG at Darkseid)
Boom!
The explosion where Darkseid was, is roaring while the Kill City Trio stand to admire the scene...
Meanwhile...
BATMAN
(Smirks impresses)
Not bad.
ZARA
That's our leaders!
But just when everything is all good...
DARKSEID
Die!
Ness body is destroyed as a red beam kills him...
TIGER
(Horrified)
Ness...
RAVEN
(Mutters)
Ugh, that idiot.
SUPER WOMAN
(Thinking to herself)
Idiot, why drop his guard. This was life or death.
Darkseid then looks at Toji and Red Fiend...
DARKSEID
You're next.
RED FIEND AND TOJI
(Scared)
Oh shit.
However, their fear is actually a feint...
DARKSEID
(Feeling electricity)
Hmmm, I'm being restricted?
?
(Looking at Darkseid and where the scapegoat was as electricity forms around him)
Here it goes.
TIGER
(Smiles)
Ness.
ROCKET
(Curious with a smirk)
What's the kid got up his sleeve?
ZARA
Go for it, Ness.
The electricity leaves his hand and goes up into the clouds causing lightning and thunder to appear within them.
NESS
You might be reading a pirated copy. Look for the official release to support the author.
(Raises his arm to the sky)
Zeus's Strike!
Ness brings his arm down and a giant lightning bolt strikes down Superman.
DARKSEID
(Feeling the damage)
Ugh!
As a huge dust cloud is formed we see Ness clapping the dust off his hand.
NESS
To easy. Guess now I can get ready for my-
Ness is instantly clotheslined by a more irritated Darkseid who...
DARKSEID
Pathetic.
TOJI, RED FIEND, AND NESS
(Toji and Red I caught into the clothesline as well)
Augh.
The force of the clothesline is so impactful that it sends them flying all the way across the park but Ness manages to stop them with a wind wall...
DARKSEID
(Intrigued seeing the three land on their feet)
Huh?
Darkseid...a being who strikes fear into even the greats...only seems to instill a sense of challenge into these 3.
NESS
(Smirks)
He's tougher than I though.
WONDER WOMAN
(Mutters)
Ness be careful.
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked at Darkseid's power along with everyone else in the room)
Does he have a weakness?
NESS
(Ness making hand signs)
Gaia for the the good one. Gaia's Throw.
DARKSEID
(Senses something above him)
This human's not normal.
Darkseid is smashed with what seems to be a mountain. Luckily most of it went into the ocean...
Geez that would of been a lot of property damage if I hadn't narrated that...
NESS
(Looking at the mountain)
Hmm-
Out of no where, Ness is smacked into the the air with the debris from the mountain as well as the barrier Darkseid made to break out with. Ness hits the ground hard...
NESS
Ugh!
RED FIEND AND TOJI
(Scared)
Raven's gonna kill us.
The heroes are now worried as they see their leader down...
WONDER WOMAN
(Concerned)
No....
TIGER
(Shocked)
How is he that strong? Ness threw a whole mountain at him.
ZARA
(Realizing something)
Um where's Raven?
Raven teleports right next to Ness and has a stare down with Darkseid before...
RAVEN
......
Raven then back to a downed Ness...
RAVEN
(Annoyed)
What have I told you about playing around?
With a dark aura roaring in her hand, Raven hits Ness with dark ball of magic...
NESS
(Jumps up and lands on his feet leaving the others in shocked)
Oww, why you that, My Goddess?! You could of killed me-
RAVEN
(Grabs Ness by his neck and looks into his eyes)
You got 7 minutes.
NESS
(Seeing the anger in her eyes)
I'm sorry...
Raven let's go and walks away from a fearful Ness...
RAVEN
(Stops to look at the other 2)
You two. You got 5 minutes.
RED FIEND AND TOJI
(Shocked)
What?
RAVEN
Or I'm else I'ma bring Star and Zara to deal with you. Good luck.
With that Raven teleports back...
TOJI
(Angry)
Bro, the fuck.
RED FIEND
(Annoyed expression)
I told you this would happen.
Everyone else, aside for those that know Ness, are speechless...
NESS
(Serious but nervous)
Look, lets just level 2 him and be done. You know how she gets.
All the other brothers can do is shake their heads...
ALL THE GIRLS EXCEPT RAVEN
(Thinking to themselves)
He's whipped.
But before further thoughts can pop into their heads, Ness and Toji start surging with energy, Ness's white aura while Toji's is a black with red highlights aura...
RED FIEND
My eye sees all.
Multiple gun barrels appear throughout his arms while mine missile launchers appear on his legs. Lastly, two big laser guns come from out his back to latch on his shoulders.
TOJI
(Quickly gets in front of Darkseid at inhuman speeds and punches him)
Kumite Style: Dragon Fist.
DARKSEID
(Coughs blood as he sent flying as a black aura dragon)
Aaah!
ZARA
(Seeing the aftermath)
Woah!
But before Darkseid can fully stand, Red Fiend fires everything, from bullets, to lasers, and missiles to keep Darkseid from moving. And as Darkseid is being bombarded by Red Fiend, Ness makes hands signs while an electric scapegoat appears next to him...
NESS
(Smirks)
Ok, time for the New One.
As the scapegoat goat spears and sends Darkseid into the clouds...
NESS
(The clouds get dark as Ness walks foward)
Zeus's.....
An extreme amount of electricity forms around Ness's hand while he walks to where Darkseid stood...
NESS
(Sends a Zeus's strike from his hand)
2nd Strike!
As Ness fires a Zeus's Strike from his hand as another Zeus's Strike with Darkseid meets it halfway in the sky for a devastating collision of electricity...Unfortunately...
DARKSEID
(Uses his barrier to break free)
Impressive.
Darkseid looks down at them with only light bruises...
NESS
(Annoyed)
Shit!
However...
DARKSEID
Ness, you are worthy of your title. But your death is emanate. For now I will spare you and this planet. You've earned my respect.
With that, that big motherfucker dimensional travels away...
TOJI
(Breathing heavily as everyone turns to normal)
What is he?
NESS
(Serious as he quickly catches his breath)
Shit...someone even Superman is scared of.
Back at JLG HQ...
BATMAN
(Serious)
You now see why Superman was needed?
ZARA
(Confused)
What do you mean? We had him on the ropes.
NESS
Na.
Everyone, save for the Kill City Trio, Raven, and Batman. are shocked at Ness's response.
NESS
(Eyes closed with a smirk)
Zeus's 2nd strike was designed to take out The Hulk or Superman. Darkseid definitely not gonna be a easy win.
RAVEN
(Looking at Ness)
........
On a happier note...
ROCKET
(Smirks)
You still made him run, so that's gotta amount to something kid.
Obviously all of the younger heroes and heroines are feeling inspired by their leaders...
MS MARVEL
(Inspired)
You guys were so badass.
STATIC
Facts, Man, that was dope.
Now back to the matter at hand...
?
(Smiles)
Dope for sure.
3 ladies make their appearance. 2 teens and one a woman...
WONDER WOMAN
Meet your Navigators, Barbara, Shuri, and Natasha Irons.
[Barbara looks like her The New Batman Adventures self. Shuri looks like her Marvel Rising: Operation Shuri self but a darker skin shade like the Disney's live action Black Panther. Lastly Natasha looks like her New Earth self.]
WONDER WOMAN
Shuri will be assigned to Red Fiend's squad, Natasha to Toji's squad, and Barbara to Ness's squad.
With that the navigator walking to their respective teams...
BARBARA
(Smirks)
Good to be working with you again, Ness.
NESS
(Smirks back)
Same.
Ness looks around at all the heroines and heroes under his command with with a determined smirk...
NESS
(Calls for everyone's attention)
Yo.
Ness then stands next to Wonder Woman and Batman...
NESS
Before we blast off, make sure y'all got everything. We blast off at midnight.
INT. DAY
Ness walks into his spacious captain's quarters ( think the Normandy SR-2 captain's quarters Mass Effect 2 but more pale than metallic look) and as the door closes behind him and Raven...extreme exhaustion-
RAVEN
(Wraps Ness's arm around her neck to keep him standing)
I got you.
Later, after a little bit of slow walking to the bathroom, Ness is now laying in the bed in some black sweatpants, black Nike sandles, a white tank, and white socks...
NESS
Ugh...damn I shouldn't overdid training last month...
Raven, now wearing one of Ness's t shirts, sits next to him with her tea...What? You thought I was gonna give y'all a better view of her?...Noooope...
RAVEN
(Calmly sips her tea)
How long until you're back at you best?
NESS
Maybe 3,4 days of training should be good enough to get me back in shape.
Ness takes a moment as he reflects over today's events...
NESS
(Looks up at Raven)
We ain't blast off yet and already dealing with drama.
RAVEN
(Smiles)
But you'll handle it.
Ness smiles back before a smirk appears on his face...
NESS
Tru. Now about our date-oh
Raven then proceeds to straddle on top of Ness...
RAVEN
(No emotion)
You're on the couch. And I don't mean your room or mines.
Oh shit...
NESS
(Shocked)
But? The only couches!
RAVEN
I don't care. I told you to stop playing around with your opponents.
Well damn, Ness...
NESS
But-
Raven then places Ness's hands right on her ass...
RAVEN
(Teasingly removes his hands off her)
No butts. Especially tonight.
NESS
(Begging)
Please, My Goddess, don't-
RAVEN
(Smirks)
Bye.
A portal opens from under Ness
NESS
(Falls into the portal)
Aaaaaaaah.
Meanwhile sitting in one of the lounging areas... Alright...alright I mean there white walls, black couches(comfortable though), and mini kitchen...
IRON WOMAN
(Annoyed)
I can't stand this guy.
SUPER WOMAN
(Nods just as annoyed)
I know. same here.
TIGER
(Sweat drops smiles)
Maybe if you give him a chance.
SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN
No!
A familiar portal opens up behind them...
ROCKET
(Notices the portal)
Uh...hmmm?
NESS
(Falls)
Aaaaah!
All that can be heard is Ness hitting the ground with a thud...
SUPER WOMAN
Oh great.
IRON WOMAN
You.
Ness can only sit depressed and in denial about his current predicament...
TIGER
(Concerned)
Ness?
BARBARA
(Curious)
You seem extremely depressed.
Ness quickly stands up with fake pride...
NESS
(Smirks)
Na. Im good.
What seems like a regular Ness, can easily be deduced as a lie. I mean everyone can see the pillow and the blanket by his foot...
NESS
(Lies)
My room had to be renovated because of a gas leak in the kitchen.
ALL EXCEPT NESS
(Pretty much thinking)
He has a kitchen in his room?! What the hell?!
Ness does actually have a kitchen in his room...I mean it's some perks to being a leader....
SUPER WOMAN
(Realizing something)
Wait, I heard you and that Raven girl-
The others feel bad for Ness, however, Iron Woman and Super Woman instantly smirk evilly with joy at the realization that the great God Ness has been...
NESS
What?
IRON WOMAN
(Smirks)
I see, he's extremely whipped.
SUPER WOMAN
(Smirks)
Awww poor Leader. Looks like you got the couch.
Stay strong Ness.
NESS
(In denial)
Na, I'm just-
SUPER WOMAN
How the mighty have fallen. Looks like your childish ways are becoming a liability.
NESS
Y'all wish that was the case, I'm a real one.
ROCKET
(Doubtful)
I don't know, Kid, you might wanna apologize to your girl before these two play with the thermostat.
Something breaks...
BARBARA
(Calmly points)
Too late.
TIGER
(Shocked)
Girls?!
IRON WOMAN
(Holding the faceplate of the thermostat)
What? We hate him. Oh, looks like the thermostat is missing and it was last on air conditioning.
NESS
(Begging)
Ladies...
But his pleas are left on death's ears...
SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN
(Walking away)
Bye, Little Boy.
As the two walk away, Ness is left looking at the others...
NESS
Could I?
ALL EXCEPT NESS
(Serious)
No.
NESS
Things to go over but thats for your leaders to go over. So Squad Toji you'll be heading to see Mogo. Red Fiend you'll be going to Tamaran. And lastly my team looking into the rumored New Krypton. Before you go chill, each squad has a meeting.
The Next Day...Ness's Conference Room...
SUPER WOMAN
(Using a mocking tone)
What does our idiot lead-
However, a more serious Ness interrupts...
NESS
(Calm)
Jokes later, even I got my serious moments. Day off tomorrow to get used to our ship as we depart for New Krypton.
At this point, everyone especially Superwoman are now serious...
NESS
Good, now I'm assigning one of you as second in command should I get sick, injured or killed.
IRON WOMAN
(Thinking to herself)
Great favoritism here we come.
However Ness gives everyone a shocker...
NESS
Super Woman, you're second in command.
SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN
(Surprised)
What?
But before anything else can be said...
NESS
(Smirks)
Look y'all. I know I'm me, but by the time I'm done with y'all, you'll be something unbeatable. Meeting adjourned.
Everyone excluding Superwoman get off their chairs and leave...
SUPER WOMAN
(Suspicious)
Why Me?
NESS
(Smirks at her)
Because I'm trusting you with my life and I'm trusting you with the team should anything happen to me. Nothing more, nothing less, Second In Command.
Superwoman grabs Ness by the collar of his shirt...
SUPER WOMAN
(Looks into his eyes with pissed off)
What's your game? I can just kill you whenever I want because of how close I am to you.
However, both are separated by a big projection of a black raven appearing from under the floor. As the raven fades off, the user reveals herself...
RAVEN
(Gives Superwoman a serious look)
Anything happens to him...
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked)
When did you?
NESS
(Smirks)
I knew you loved me.
RAVEN
(Looks at Ness)
......
And with that look, Ness backs away so that the women can talk...
RAVEN
(Looks at her)
Forget him. I'm talking to you.
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked but then becomes serious again)
How do you put up with this boy?
Raven vs Superwoman? Looks like-
RAVEN
(interrupting the narrator)
He's putting faith in you, despite everything with your cousin.
SUPER WOMAN
(Anger builds as she clenches his fist)
I lost my family.
RAVEN
And that's Ness's fault? You know when he tried to-
SUPER WOMAN
(Feeling conflicted)
Stop-
RAVEN
I never seen Ness, with so much hatred. He blamed himself for that day.
Ness can only watch the two as he remembers as well...
RAVEN
What should of been a day of accomplishment....was a day of pain, as he cried to me.
Superwoman is stuck in a mental battle with herself. I mean, shit, do you accept that your only family has truly lost their way or would taking care of their enemy turn them back to normal? And to make it worst, you're family brought bystanders into the mixed and almost did the unforgivable...
SUPER WOMAN
I heard what happened to you and I'm sorry for what my dud to you. But, why did he become like that? That wasn't...
NESS
Same thing that can happen to any hero. They live to become a villain.
SUPER WOMAN
And you?
NESS
Live long enough, hopefully. I rather help people than save a world. I already have blood on my hand. But look, Superwoman I know you can do this. Be my second and let's be the best squad in this league.
After taking a deep breath Superwoman calms down and stares into Ness eyes...
SUPER WOMAN
(Smirks as she closes her eyes in arrogance)
Whatever, Little Boy, when you fail I'll run this who squad, maybe even the whole League.
But before she can continue with her monologue...
RAVEN
(Barely let's out a giggle)
No...
NESS
(Kissing her neck)
Come on, I owe you after annoying you. I don't wanna be on the couch, My Goddess.
RAVEN
(Feeling her resolve break)
Ugh...no.
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked and blushing in annoyance)
What the hell?
As the lovers remember that Superwoman is here...
NESS
(Smirks at Superwoman)
Raven, can we have-
Raven hits Ness with a dark magical ball that sends him through the wall...
RAVEN
(Stares at her with no emotion)
You can leave, pretty sure he'll be out for awhile.
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked and confused)
How are you both-
RAVEN
He's not my boyfriend.
SUPER WOMAN
(Curious)
And yet.
RAVEN
He has his uses.
SUPER WOMAN
So you're not in lov-
RAVEN
Its between him and me, not your business
A whistle can be heard in the by the entrance...
BARBARA
(Smiles in astonishment)
Wow Zara was right. They're madly in love.
All of a sudden the room is filled with more guests...
ZARA
(Frowns)
Raven, are you really gonna make him sleep on the coach?
TIGER
(Sweatdrops smiles)
He may flirt a lot but it seems like he's head over hills.
ZARA
Oh, that's because Raven put the law down on.
Zara immediately ducks a chair that's enveloped with magical aura...
RAVEN
That's your warning.
ZARA
(Smirks)
Pretty sure the babies are coming in a few years.
SUPER WOMAN
(Shocked)
How can you two be so irresponsible?
RAVEN
(Annoyed)
I'm way more responsible then he'll...
Everyone aside from a knocked out Ness look at Raven...
RAVEN
(Realizing what she admitted to)
Wait I don't-
INT. DAY
We are now back at the entrance to Raven's(Ness's room)...
BMS: Avant - Read Your Mind
NESS
(Holding Raven's hands in his own with a pleading look in his eyes)
Come on, My Goddess.
RAVEN
(Annoyed)
You can be so annoying.
NESS
(Smirks)
But you love me for it.
Instantly Raven removes her hands from Ness's
RAVEN
Nope, Nice try.
NESS
(Uses puppy dog eyes)
But we gonna be separated soon. You're here now and already my heart aches for.
Raven turns away...
RAVEN
(Annoyed yet blushing)
Don't say things like that, you Idiot.
NESS
(Softly turns her around to face him)
Raven, look into my eyes. I missed you, I don't wanna sleep on a couch when I can hold you in my arms and all that sentimental shit.
And with that a passionate kiss initiates...
RAVEN
(In between kisses)
I believe you...but you need-
Ness then proceeds to kissing her neck...
RAVEN
(Softly moans with her eyes closing just as she sees Zara)
Mmmmm, no fair, you know that's my-What the fuck?!
BME:
Who knew Raven could curse?
ZARA
(Eyes closed with an expression on of wisdom)
I told you she'd break.
For some it is a tough realization...
SPIDER-MAN
(In a random corner of the spacious hall)
So it was true.
STATIC
(Tears of pain)
My two favorite Titans are dating.
ROCKET
(Smirks)
Nice job, Kid, I feel like a proud Dad.
NESS
(Smiling brightly as he shrugs)
Well I mean thats how a real nigga does-
Ugh...
NESS
(Sent flying across the spacious hallway)
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!
The great God Ness is once again defeated. Shit, it's always the ones closest to you...
TIGER
(Concerned)
Ness!
But before everyone can worry...
NESS
(Unconscious)
My Goddess, my heart urns for y-
RAVEN
(Eyes glow red)
He'll be alright...and as for you all.
As Ness wakes up he sees..."dead niggas"...
NESS
At least I wasn't the only one KO'ED.
The next day...In what appears to be the main mess hall...
SUPER WOMAN
Hello, ladies and gentlemen. Oh and the, Incompetent Leader.
THOR
How was the couch?
IRON WOMAN
By my calculation, he's had a lonely night.
But Ness is too focused on his target.
NESS
(Sees Raven walking)
Hold that though-
But he is sent a glare in the form of Raven...
NESS
(Depressingly sighs)
Never mind.
A hand is then placed on his shoulder...
ZARA
(Feeling bad)
Awww, Ness, we're sorry.
TOJI
I don't think you are, Babe.
NESS
(Betrayed)
Zaaaara!
ZARA
(Gets a little serious)
Nope, Ness, you need to endure your punishment. If you player way out of all your arguments. It will get more severe because she'll realize you're trying to skip your punishments. Now man up.
NESS
(Sad anime eyes)
But its not fair. I hate the couch I want my Raven.
Ness can sit no longer as he immediately stands up...
ROCKET
(Confused)
Wait a minute...Why would-
And before Rocket can save him...
NESS
(Running away)
Raaaaaaaaaaaveeeeeeen!
ROCKET
(Looks away from Ness to look at...)
So, you and Raven were in on this.
ZARA
(Smirks)
Last time they had an argument like this, they got trapped in their hotel room for like the whole day.
TOJI
The music rotation was crazy. When we saw them later, their bodies glowed more than the Bruce Leroy guy listening to the "Let Your Soul Glow" song.
SUPER WOMAN THOR AND IRON WOMAN
(Disturbed)
........
Later in a certain hallway...
BATMAN BEYOND
So you how you been managing with the boy.
IRON WOMAN
He's infuriating. But now luckily that Super Woman is second in command, maybe we'll actually get missions done.
BATMAN BEYOND
Sounds better than us. He made me second in command but he's making us study formations. And the worst part is that Zara girl keeps asking questions about it and about the future.
IRON WOMAN
Why is...no way....
SUPER WOMAN
Hey you tw-I thought she was lying.
RED FIEND
Nope, and he's going with the sappy shit.
A few moments before in Ness's Room...
BMS: Faith Evans - I Love You
RAVEN
(Annoyed, facing away.)
What now?
NESS
(Pleading look in his eyes)
My Goddess, please I'll do anything. Having you mad at me is killing me.
RAVEN
(Turns around to face him with a smile)
Fine, Zara and the Girls wanna do a girls' night tomorrow. And we wanna watch a movies on that new Karen Network, on the ship for now on.
NESS
(Shocked and nervous as he looks into her eyes)
What?! But that sub cost is $1,000 a month! And I just bought that new Mustang GTC few months-
RAVEN
(Unperturbed as she puts a hand on his cheek)
Jaison, you always use logic at the right time...but right now isn't the time.
NESS
(Annoyed as he is sitting on the end of the bed)
The answer is no to that sub-
But Raven has other plans as she pushes him onto the bed...
RAVEN
(Still smiling unperturbed.)
Its too late to refuse my terms.
NESS
You forget, I'm Ness-
But even God Ness...
RAVEN
(Gets on her knees and looks up at Ness with a smirk.)
Come....Lets really chat, Lover Boy.
BME:
Scene fades to black...Oh y'all wondering about Ness? Well he "lost his soul", luckily the story will go on just gotta go see the shinigami...Back to the ladies in the mess hall...
ZARA
(Smirks with her eyes closed)
And thats the plan, Ladies.
IRON WOMAN
(Confused)
But what idiot would be gullible to pay that much for that pricey of subscription?
A dark portal opens in front of them as Raven appears...
ZARA
(Excited)
Raven, was you able to get it.
RAVEN
(Emotionless)
Put it down for 1 year for now.
Zara takes the credit card then uses her phone...
ZARA
(Smiles)
Done and done.
The other women are left shocked by this news while Zara hands the card back...
IRON WOMAN
(Shocked)
To think she would spend that much money.
ZARA
(Smiles)
Not her money.
With that Raven disappears in her portal...and not even a minute later...
NESS
(Annoyed and hurt)
Raven!
Ness, weirdly enough, stumbles a little and almost falls as he makes a stop in front of the girls...
NESS
(Looking around)
Fuck!
You're welcome by the way, Ness, the shinigami charges me a arm and a leg to revive characters...
NESS
(Looks at Zara)
Zara....Where Is-?
ZARA
(Smirks)
Not telling you. Girls...Over Boys.
"Help" arrives as Toji and Red Fiend follow into the Mess Hall...
TOJI
(Concerned)
Bro, did you find her?
NESS
(Shakes his head as he looks at them)
No, you 2?
But the other members of the Kill City Trio shake their heads as well...
NESS
(Running away)
Damn! Raven, where are you?!
After Ness leaves...
RED FIEND
(Looks at Toji and Zara)
You know he's gonna kill you two when he finds out.
The others, except for Zara and Toji are even more dumbfounded at this turn of events...
ZARA
(Smirks evilly)
Not my fault my bae can't say no to me.
TOJI
(Pleading look in his eyes)
Bro, please don't tell him.
SUPER WOMAN, THOR AND IRON WOMAN
(Pretty much thinking)
This is going to be a good day.
MS. MARVEL
(Still shocked)
To think Ness could lack that badly.
ZARA
Ness and Toji may be fearsome to many, but as women, we just got our ways with the boys that love us.
With that Zara gives Toji a long passionate kiss...
ZARA
(Smirks)
I'll be seeing you later, Daddy.
TOJI
(In heaven as he's left in a "trance")
Yeah...Later...
Ness Room...again lol...
NESS
(Highly Annoyed)
That was a dirty trick.
RAVEN
(Looks into his eyes then smirks)
Yeah it was...but we both enjoyed it.
This nigga whipped y'all...
NESS
Hey!
RAVEN
(Sensually runs her hand from her chest down to her hips and posterior)
Its not my fault the great God-Ness can't resist his Goddess.
NESS
(Watches but focuses back to her eyes with a more serious look)
Oh yeah...well...I'll just send you to the couch.
RAVEN
(Unperturbed)
You can't send me to the couch. You'll think you won for 5 minutes then come get me.
Later in the hallway...
Raven, with a pillow and a blanket, bumps into some of the other girls...my theory they we're probably listening in...
ZARA
(Impressed)
Wow, to think Ness actually sent you to the couch-
But before they can even exit the hallway?
ZARA
(Looks surprised )
Where the pillows and blanket go?
They then turn back towards Ness room to now see Ness standing there...
NESS
Ladies.
SUPER WOMAN, THOR AND IRON WOMAN
(Thinking to themselves)
No way.
Ness is "down bad"...
NESS
(Nervous but calm)
Um so, Raven, I need you to relay something to Toji. Can you come with me for a second?
ZARA
(Smirks)
Don't worry, Ness, just tell me and I'll relay it to him.
Although Ness seems calm...
NESS
(Telepathically communicating to Raven)
Stop it! I know you're smirking inside.
RAVEN
(Telepathically communicating back)
You just can't resist. Take a good look and break before me, God Ness
NESS
(Speaking to everyone)
Yeah, but Raven is his Second In Command -
IRON WOMAN
(Smirks)
Not officially, until you put it in your report.
SUPER WOMAN
(Smirks)
Tell me reliably incompetent, Leader, you're procrastinating that until the last minute right?
Ness smirks at that then-
RAVEN
(Telepathically communicating to Ness)
If you lie, I'll sleep with the girls for the sleep-over night.
NESS
(Speaking to everyone)
Yeah but-
RAVEN
(Telepathically communicating to Ness)
You must be losing it. You know, I'm curious what you got planned. Im sure something fulfilling [for filling]. But like you, think I'll just stretch this out for as much as I ca-
Just then the thermostat behind them short circuits out of nowhere causing the girls to look at it...
ZARA
(Turning back around)
What was....?
Ness and Raven are no where to be seen.
ZARA
Damn it, we was so close to breaking him.
INT. DAY
Right in the hallway of the training area...
SUPER WOMAN
(Humming a song)
Mmmhmmmm mmmmm, mmm, mmmmhmmm.
NESS
(Inside of the training area)
Yeah, just like that. Feel it enter into you.
NATURE GIRL
(Excited)
I feel it, Ness.
NESS
Good now this next move I taught Raven.
Super Woman horrified from hearing this out, rushes into the training area...
SUPER WOMAN
(Angry)
Pervert, you leave that girl alone.
NESS
(Confused)
What? We're training.
NATURE GIRL
(Smiling at Super Woman)
Ness was teaching me techniques.
SUPER WOMAN
(Feeling bad)
I...uh.
Ness then walks up to Super Woman...
NESS
(Smirks)
Look, Super Babe, I know you're pent up for me but you gotta ask my Shawty for permission.
SUPER WOMAN
(Annoyed)
Shut up. As if I'd ever, you wish that you could handle me boy.
Super Woman realizes that she just flirted back at Ness...
SUPER WOMAN
(Annoyingly blushes)
And stop smirking.
NESS
What ever you say, Kryptonian Lover.
SUPER WOMAN
(Walking away)
Aaaaah I can't stand you.
Later in the mess hall, some of the others are sitting at a table...
TOJI
(Impressed)
Wow, so Ness manage to put you on the couch.
ZARA
(Impressed as well)
I'm kinda proud of him. He's learning yay.
RAVEN
(Annoyed and depressed)
I feel so used.
TOJI
(Smiles)
I'm pretty sure bro felt the same. Girls, you can't use us for material gain, it puts us in our feelings.
ZARA
(Smirks)
What about if we use you boys for sex?
TOJI
Think bro and me would agree, thats not fair. How do we turn you ladies down? And the fact that we love our girlfriends doesn't help either.
SUPER WOMAN
(Walking in the Mess Hall)
Stupid boy...with all his perverted flirting....grrrrr.
Super Woman is seemingly ignoring them at first until...
SUPER WOMAN
(Looks at Raven seriously)
You!
RAVEN
(Confused yet calm)
Me?
SUPER WOMAN
How do I handle him?
ZARA
(Smirking)
Oh is Raven collecting?
RAVEN
(Highly Annoyed as she looks at Zara)
What did I tell you?
TOJI
Maybe you should of asked Wonder Woman first.
SUPER WOMAN
What...no I just want him to be more serious.
Just then everyone else, excluding Raven, are laughing...
ZARA
My ribs!! Ahahahaha!
SUPER WOMAN
(Highly Annoyed)
Hey!
TOJI
(Calms down)
Ness almost can't be serious.
SUPER WOMAN
(Serious)
Almost but then that means theres a way.
RAVEN
You would have to beat him.
SUPER WOMAN
(Smirks)
Easy.
Just then everyone else, excluding Raven, are laughing again...
ZARA
Please!!! Make it stop!!!
SUPER WOMAN
(Highly Annoyed as she looks at Zara)
Whats so funny? You think he's stronger than me?
RAVEN
Not stronger, but is prepared for you.
TOJI
To be honest Ness earned this leadership. He may not be a as strategic as me or Red Fiend, but he makes up for it with his improvisation, cleverness and determination. Those 3 are a deadly combinations.
RAVEN
You seen his battle with Darkseid, Ness took some time off of training just to get Toji and Red Fiend into fighting shape. I even train with him and yet he still manages to get more powerful.
ZARA
(Smirks)
You sure do train with him?
RAVEN
(Annoyed yet blushing)
Zara!
BMS: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09
Justice League Galactic
A Fanfiction Written by…
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