Back so I'm just going quick
Episode 1:
Pretty much the summary. You get to meet the new Justice League and as you can see, we got characters from the prequel on this team. While writing Birth Of Ness I came up with an idea of him leading his own League. Now why BatMan is cool with it? Shit's spoiler territory. After y'all meet them it's plan to see that the adult members don't take them seriously even after Ness whoops some of their asses. Their disdain for the younger heroes leads us to kill city prison where Superman is serving his time. He fools Super Woman into capture Raven, but ends up only bringing Ness there first. This episode you get to see why they're each others arch nemesis (if you decided not to read the prequel lol ). Luckily Raven saves Superman from being killed by a dark influenced Ness and she manages to keep Ness in check. So you think at the end Super Woman would get in trouble but Ness decides to not only keep her in the league, but on his team as well.
Episode 2: Mostly filler aside from the Darkseid fight and a few conversations between characters. I feel like this chapter also displayed the leaders skill as well as where in terms of power where they land at. The kumite fighting style is kinda broken huh lol.
Episode 3:
Episode 3 we got them going to New Krypton to meet some survivors and establish allies. As you can see Ness is already pissed as he learns that Superman may be released if negotiations don't go smoothly enough. Super Woman and Ness get into a another debate about Superman before they land on the planet. Then, they meet up and negotiate with El-El and Arielle-El who turn out to be Super Woman's aunt and uncle. After some horrible negotiations, Oh and Arielle seems up to something. After hearing more about the Ness vs Superman battle (that some of you should read if triggers ain't a issue you motha...[redacted] ).
After hearing more about the Ness vs Superman battle El-El decides to spar with Ness but the spar ends when El-El almost fires a lazer beam from his eyes at Ness. From there it's just everyone getting updated on the mission and Ness x Raven moment
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Characters:
Ness:
For some who read the prequel it'll be some questions I'll answer here but the rest hits spoiler territory. Does Ness seem more goofy and chill? Well yeah, Raven's been a great influence on him for one and secondly he's not in his "bag"(feelings) about his past as much. Lastly, you also have to remember episodes 8-10 in Birth of Ness(Wow I can actually reference my own shit) , Ness has won a lot, lost a lot, seen others win or lose a lot, and seen the good get corrupted, so he doesn't let things stress him as much.
Raven:
As you can see, she got that man whipped. But on a serious note, you can tell Raven wants her get back against Superman. Raven is still her but is even more confident in herself to the point it shows at times. And just like she's stated, she's been training as well. I like the dynamic her and Ness has.
Prequel Characters:
For a lot of them it's the same with what happened with Ness. Toji has a lot to prove as I saw him as the weaker of the 3 as he was not as active as Ness or Red Fiend. Zara of course has easily secondly lost the most and I may dive into that in the future.
Super Woman:
I brought Super Woman in the story for many reasons. She doesn't trust Ness and is conflicted because of everything her cousins done.
Superman:
I'm obviously not a fan but as a villain, I feel he'll make Ness into a better hero. Fun fact as well: one part I find funny for y'all who may not of read the OVA/Oneshot is that, you all thought Raven was having or is the only one whose had nightmares regarding Superman. If you read it you may think about differently because never once have I mentioned that Ravens had any nightmares over the fight between those two.
Darkseid - I felt Darkseid sets the fact that Ness was never OP, even though I kinda never made him OP in the first place lol. Looking back on it Ness has not won all his battles off of pure skill.
So I'm honestly thinking about keeping it the same as Birth Of Ness by keeping it 10-15 episode due to the fact that I wouldn't want shit to get repetitive.
To end off its good to be back and thanks for love and support.