I left writing for a lot of reasons but Im back with a new mentality. I want people to know this: From now on I write for me again and my oc submitters who were and bored and read this to pass the time.
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BMS(Background Music Start)
BME(Background Music End)
Theme songs and other songs are below this:
Opening: Remix Maniacs - "JUSTICE LEAGUE" [Trap Remix!]
BGM: Faith Evans - Come Over
Middle: Dj Kay Slay ft. Vado, Locksmith, Fred The Godson, Mysonne, Jon Connor, Nino Man & Joell Ortiz– Back To The Bars
Ending: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09
INT. DAY
Inside the church's mess hall...
ANGELA
Welcome back, Raven, and a warm welcome to Justice League Galactic.
15 other church staff members clap around this big ass table...
NESS
Thanks Auntie, as leader and Earth's ambassador, it's an honor to be a part of Azarath's reemergence.
Later as everyone is chillin, conversating, parlaying and etc...
ARELLA
Ness, after talking to my niece. We both feel a relationship between you and her should also be initiated in order to further strengthen our new bond.
NESS
(Spots Raven)
Hold that thought, I'll be right back.
Ness quickly goes towards team Toji..
NESS
(Holds his hands out)
Come with me.
Raven rolls her eyes then grabs his hand He then pulls her into a more quiet area...
NESS
(Whispering with a serious tone as he looks into her eyes)
Raven, the fuck?!
RAVEN
(Whispering calmly as she crosses her arms looking back at him)
I know, but please hold your emotions-
NESS
(Still whispering while mad)
Fuck that, mother or not, she can't keep disrespecting you in front of me.
RAVEN
(Whispering)
Jaison!
They stare each other down...
NESS
(Sighs)
I know you're not the old you. I'm not coddling you-
RAVEN
(Teasingly being shocked)
Wow another big-
NESS
(Whispering highly annoyed)
Raven!
RAVEN
(Still whispering but serious)
Mission first.
Later as everyone sits at the table together...
ARELLA
(Smiles)
So, Ness, about our early suggestion.
NESS
(Polite)
Thanks, Lady Arella, but no thanks.
ARELLA
(Annoyed yet smiling a little bit more)
In my humble opinion, a leader like yourself deserves a dedicated partner who can truly represent your interests.
NESS
Thank you, but my answer is no.
Try as he might to keep his cool...
LAUREN
(Confused and annoyed)
I can't see it. You would date-
NESS
(Calm yet able to get his voice across the room)
Lady Lauren. I'd prefer you not finish that sentence and -
ANGELA
(Smirks)
I knew I liked you, Ness. But allow me.
Angela then stands up...
ANGELA
(Addressing everyone)
In the past, Raven was referred to as Trigon's gateway and offspring..
All eyes remain fixed on her and Raven…
ANGELA
(Looks at Raven)
I never considered my niece in that light. She recently prevented Trigon from infiltrating our alternate dimension and other Earths once again, even after he discovered alternative methods...
Angela then looks back at her now attentive audience (ha I know big words).
ANGELA
And even now, when more of Trigon's offspring try to threaten Azarath, Raven continues to prove her as only Azarath's child and is no longer a spawn of Trigon.
That news causes everyone to be shocked as murmurs are heard...
ARELLA
(Shocked )
Impossible! You're telling me that-
NESS
Trigon's no longer Raven's curse. Which means they got other ways of releasing him.
ARELLA
How?
NESS
(Smirks)
Not all secrets can be reveal, Lady Arella.
ARELLA
(Angry)
Are you…purposely withholding information from Azarath?
NESS
No, I just feel that Lady Angela is more suitable to handle this situation. So with that I'll retire early and all that shit. Lady Angela?
ANGELA
(Smiles in understanding)
You may.
With that Ness is escorted to his room, by some of the church members...
LAUREN
(Confused with a pout)
What's his problem?
I just facepalmed…
TOJI
(Calm)
Permission to speak freely, Lady Angela, Lady Arella.
They both nods...
TOJI
Well, Lauren, how would you feel if the mother of your significant other, as well as their cousin were constantly trying to make them feel less than dirt?
LAUREN
(Excitedly understanding)
Oh, extremely angry.
Oh my moth-
TOJI
(Calm yet annoyed)
And yet-
RAVEN
(Gives Toji a serious look)
Enough, Toji. We are here on a mission, and anything involving me is my worry.
This tense atmosphere only gets worst...
ANGELA
(Serious)
Arella...
ARELLA
(Serious)
This demon is no daughter of mine.
RAVEN
(Gives Arella a her patent non-emotional stare)
And why should that bother me?
Woah...
ARELLA
(Shocked yet angry)
Because, you're just trying to come back here.
RAVEN
I'm here to see Aunt Angela and then I'm gone for good.
ANGELA
(Sad)
But, Raven, Azarath-
RAVEN
(Smiles at her)
Is not my home and probably never was. I have a great life. And can't wait to catch you up on it.
With that Raven stands up...
RAVEN
(No emotion)
For now, I have to deal with our leader.
CUT TO:
BMS: Remix Maniacs - JUSTICE LEAGUE [Trap Remix!]
bryf963 Presents…
Justice League Galactic
A Fanfiction Written by…
Fo$t Da Writer
Original Characters by…
Fo$T Da Writer
XxTributomxX
Red Fiend
Starring…
Ness
Raven
Zara Larson
Toji Chan
Red Fiend
White Tiger
Super Woman
Iron Woman
Rocket
Thor
Static Shock
Spider-Man
Ms. Marvel
Batman Beyond
Wild Dog
Also Starring
Nature Girl
Wonder Woman
Batman
Superman
Trigon
Justice League Galactic
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BME:
INT. NIGHT
BGM Start:
Wow it's a lot of white in this room…
A shirtless Ness, gently drifts off to sleep while on his stomach, until, he perceives his goddess entering the room.
[Chorus]
Won't you come over and make love to me
'Cause I haven't seen you in a while
Really miss your smile, oh
Won't you come over and make love to me
Baby, I want ya
As clothes can be heard falling to the floor, the bed emits a gentle creaking sounds and Ness feels two thighs rub against his sides as the goddess straddles his back.
[Verse 1]
Every time we're together, I feel a special part of me
Drawing me closer, closer to you, baby
I can't explain, it's just a magic that we share
Something between us two
[Chorus]
Won't you come over and make love to me
'Cause I haven't seen you in a while (no no)
Really miss your smile, oh
Won't you come over and make love to me
(make sweet love to me)
Baby, I want ya
A beautiful, undressed Raven, begins massaging Ness's shoulders and then proceeds to massage his back while continuing her actions....
[Verse 2]
Sitting here in my window, thinking of nothing but your face
Oh, baby, I try to remember how it used to be
When you used to love me, love me every day, oh baby
[Bridge]
I don't wanna fight ya, I just want you to see
That you are the one, the only one that's for me
Baby, let me show ya, there's no greater love
Baby, I love you for the things you do
And I want you to come over
After a few minutes, one can only observe the silhouette of Raven straddling Ness, who is now positioned on his back.
[Chorus]
Won't you come over and make love to me
'Cause I haven't seen you in a while
Really miss your smile, oh
Won't you come over and make love to me
Baby, I want ya
[Bridge]
(Oh, I don't wanna fight ya)
I don't wanna fight ya, I just want you to see
That you are the one, the only one that's for me
Baby, let me show ya, there's no greater love
Baby, I love you for the things you do
And I want you to come over (come on over)
As the couple shares a tender kiss, there is noticeable movement as the world slowly transition to darkness....
[Outro]
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
Won't you come over
Won't you come over
Baby, I just wanna make sweet love
Just wanna show you, you are the one
BGM End:
Later, after an intense “love making" session, we find the couple covered under the sheets...
NESS
(Feeling conflicted as he looks at Raven)
Raven, I'm sorry about-
RAVEN
(Looks into Ness eyes with understanding)
It's ok. I asked you to allow the woman you love to be continuously disrespected, not only by her mother but also by her cousin, and then to be treated like she is less than human. I knew it was too much to ask, yet I still asked you. Despite this, you managed to hold in your anger and didn’t create a big issue. Thank you, Jaison.
NESS
(Smiles)
No prob, you know how much I love you, Raven.
RAVEN
(Smiles)
I know and I love you too.
NESS
(Holds his arms out in victory )
Finally, after a weeks.
RAVEN
(Rolls her eyes annoyed)
Shut up, Idiot, you know I'm not that good with showing affection.
NESS
(Smirks as he brings his arms back down)
I'm your idiot tho.
RAVEN
(Rolls her eyes but with a smiles)
Just hold me.
Ness smiles as he cuddles his Goddess.
Later...In the middle of a church's ruin not too far from Azarath...
DYGON
(Walks up to the Trigon statue)
Father!
A portal opens in front of Dygon and the disappointment and anger can be sensed from here...
TRIGON
(Talking from the other side of the portal)
I saw it already. Why did you retreat?
DYGON
(Fearful)
Did you not see what he did to us? They're too....aaaaaaaagh!
Dygon's body slowly is plagued with strange symbols on his skin...
TRIGON
(Smirks)
Sometimes you have to do things yourself.
WRATH
(Shocked as his brother transforms)
Brother?!
Meanwhile...
LAUREN
(Weird symbols cover her body)
Aaaaah!
Arella then enters Lauren's room.
ARELLA
(Concerned)
Lauren whats-
But to her shock it's the mark of being she fears the most...
ARELLA
(Fearful)
It can't be...
LAUREN
(Scared)
Aunt Arella...help me.
ARELLA
(Backs away with her hand out)
STAY BACK!
Just then more footsteps are heard...
ANGELA
(Concerned)
What's a matter?
Seeing the situation, Angela remains calm...
ANGELA
We need to get Raven.
ARELLA
(Angry)
That demon did this to my beautiful niece. Why can't you see that?!
ANGELA
(Serious)
Because it's the same reason Brother convinced you to save Raven...and Lauren.
ARELLA
(Shocked )
You knew?!
ANGELA
Yes. And when I heard my niece beat Trigon before, I knew she could help Lauren.
She then walks to Lauren and hugs her...
ANGELA
Now let's go get the others.
Later, Team Toji and Ness join...
RAVEN
(Looking at Lauren's marks)
Trigon is somehow summoning himself but he still needs Lauren in order to become completely free.
ANGELA
(Concerned)
Can...you-?
RAVEN
(Serious)
Yes, I trained more in the sealing arts since the last time he entered Earth. But I'll need time-
Just then the ground starts shaking...
MS. MARVEL
(Fearful)
What was that?!
RAVEN
He's coming.
The ground shakes again...
NESS
(Smirks as he stretches and moves his arms in and out horizontally)
I'll stall papa Trigon, then. Lady Angela, if I give you the SpiderMan, Static and Ms. Marvel you can get the citizens to a safe place.
ANGELA
(Concerned)
Yes, but this is too dangerous.
NESS
(Starts walking out.)
Good, Toji, make sure Raven gets the spell off. I'll beat Trigon’s ass across Azarath.
ARELLA
(In disbelief at what she's hearing)
You? Win? We are talking about The Conqueror of Worlds. How are you going to stop him?
.....
NESS
(Looks at Arella)
Eazy, I got a Raven.
As Ness leaves, everyone except Lauren and Arella smile at this, even Raven...
BMS: Dj Kay Slay ft. Vado, Locksmith, Fred The Godson, Mysonne, Jon Connor, Nino Man & Joell Ortiz– Back To The Bars
[Verse 1: Nino Man]
When a little time go by, they forget what you've done for them
Always tried to comfort them, now you ready to come for them
Catch him when he throw out the trash, then really dump on 'em
He can barely walk through his av', niggas be jumpin' him
Friends kept pumpin' him 'til they back got the pump in 'em
Walk by bumpin' 'em, like they voted for Trump and 'em
Niggas ain't cool 'cause you loyal, they cool 'cause you up
They will stop doin' shit for you when you losin' bucks
Can't tell who rootin' for you, confusin' as fuck
That's why I refused to be toyed with, the Ruger is tucked
I'm from 30 Lenox
Got off a half in an hour, imagine thirty minutes
We can't go half on a sour, you run a dirty business
'Cause I'm the man with the power
I'm really sturdy with this, this shit'll hurt the witness
This the drama hour, free the whole Rikers Island
They ain't comin' home yet so they on Rikers wildin'
Kay Slay, this shit ain't for play, play
Let 'em know we spray K's and spin 'em like bay blades
BME:
EXT. EARLY MORNING (DARK)
As a giant Trigon approaches Azarath...
TRIGON
(Evil grin)
Soon, I will be at full strength.
As the evacuating civilians head towards the church, we see Arella and Angela at the front door overseeing as Ms. Marvel, Spiderman and Static Shock are locating then guiding any stray or uninformed civilians...
ARELLA
(Fearful as she stare at him)
No, it's him!
TRIGON
(Looking down at them)
Ah, Arella and Angela…and Raven.
Toji and Raven who are on a field outside of the city, stare back at Trigon unafraid...
TRIGON
(Looking at the screaming civilians as he smirks)
Watch me destroy everything you love. For none is stronger than Trigon.
Trigon then fires a dark beam from his mouth at the screaming civilians....
TRIGON
(Looking at the explosion caused by his beam)
Hm?
However...
ARELLA
(Shocked )
We're not dead?
As the smoke clears from a now broken rock wall, a prideful screech can be heard...
ANGELA
(Points up)
Look!
Above them stands...a huge phoenix...
?
(Smirks while standing on the pheonix's back with his arms crossed)
Hey, Papa Trigon! I think you forgot about me!
ANGELA
(Smiles in relief.)
Ness!
Trigon the Conqueror vs God-Ness...Its gonna be a crazy one...
TRIGON
(Narrows his eyes at Ness)
You, the boy.
However instead of fearful like the civilians, Ness smirks in anticipation of the fight he is about to engage in...
TRIGON
(Serious)
I see you're still in love with my daughter. Tell me, what would your death mean to her?
NESS
Only thing you killing today, is my attention. I'm ready for the smoke.
All the civilians are, comically, left in extreme shock at Ness's lack of fear...this is Trigon Conqueror,conqueror and destroyer of planets...
ARELLA
(Shocked and fearful)
Is he crazy?!
Trigon sends dark projectile beams from his eyes so that Ness can't all of them in time...
ARELLA
(Seeing the beams about to hit them)
Oh no!
However a huge lightning infused tiger and a earth wall creating wolf appear and block the blast...
ANGELA
(Shocked thinking as he stands proudly on four legs)
A tiger.
VICE
Vice, representation of Zeus, Young Ness sent us.
It's now obvious...this will be a battle between two monsters in their own rights...
ARELLA
(Looking at Ness in amazement)
What is he?!
Ness then decides it's his turn...
NESS
(Making handsigns)
Ight...hold this...Gaia Throw!
A giant mountain from the sky appears out of no where and attempts to hit Trigon...Who catches it...
TRIGON
(Smirks holding the mountain above his head)
That's it?
However...
NESS
(Smirks)
And the second one?
TRIGON
(Confused)
What-
Another mountain then appears and strikes Trigon right in the face...
TRIGON
(Falls as the first mountain lands on the second one)
Ugh!
As Trigon falls on his back, civilians cheer in hope...
NESS
(Pounds his chest in triumph)
Yeeeaaah, Nigga!
Meanwhile...
RAVEN
(Sits with legs crossed)
Ready?
TOJI
(Smirks with a thumbs up as he stands guard)
Let's do it, Sis.
With the confirmation Raven starts her chanting.
A few moments later, as Raven is now deep within her mindscape, Toji quickly blocks a fiery blast with his aura alone...wait, what the fuck? When I write...ok, obviously I'm doing a Kumite aura thing...
TOJI
(Annoyed)
Of course you're here.
WRATH
(Serious)
Sister.
TOJI
(Gets into fighting stance with smirk)
Hey Wrath...Thing, where's your brother?
WRATH
Dead.
TOJI
(Looks at Raven then sighs as he looks back at Wrath)
Great, looks like it's just me. Fine, I'll show him my power then.
Once again however Wrath shows that big...wow, pause on myself...he's fast for being a Brock Lesner buff motherfucker...
TOJI
(Clotheslined)
Ugh!
Just as Toji hits the ground from the clothesline, Wrath is already getting ready to hit Raven with a fiery blast...
WRATH
(Fires the blast)
Guwaaaaaaaa!
We are now taken back to a "triumphant" Ness...
NESS
(Smirking)
Not so toug-
A smaller Trigon drop kicks Ness off of Ra...
NESS
Ack!
Ness then hits the ground right by the civilians...
TRIGON
(Smirks as he walks towards Ness and the civilians)
You're interesting, Ness. How about you fight a smaller target?
However as we know our hero...
NESS
(Smirks as he gets his breath back)
I bet you tell all the women that to-
Oh, well looks like Ness’s insult somehow landed...
NESS
(Thinking to himself as he looks at Trigon)
He's getting stronger.
Ness throws a fireball...that dissipates on contact with Trigon...
TRIGON
(Smirks)
Heh!
Trigon then sends a dark beam from his eyes...
TRIGON
(Gets behind Ness as he tries to stab Ness's back with his dark hand)
Die.
NESS
(Dodges the dark hand blade)
Shit!
As Trigon starts practicing his fencing skill with his dark blade hand, Ness dodges for his life…
Back to Toji, who sends Wrath's fire blast into the air with an uppercut-like kick (think Rock Lee from Naruto)...
TOJI
(Thinking to himself as Wrath just drops back down on his feet)
He's a running tank.
Toji understands...he has to use more power to beat Wrath...
TOJI
Fine.
Toji then charges up...Just as Ness dodges another stab, Trigon fires a huge blast from his hand...
TRIGON
(As the blast engulfs Ness)
Too easy.
However a huge surge of energy is manifested...
?
(Serious tone)
Hades’s ignition.
TRIGON
(Hit by an intense stream of fire)
Ugh!
Ness smirks but then frowns...
TRIGON
(Excited)
More!
Trigon sends two dark projectiles at Ness...
TRIGON
(Raising his arms up as a huge ball of energy forms)
Come on, Ness, fight this.
Ness is barely able to dissolve the blast with his rock wall...
NESS
(Pushed back)
Shit!
But just when Ness is able to keep himself from falling backward, he's hit with a choke chokeslam by Trigon...
NESS
(Feeling the painful impact)
Aaaah!
However it's not over as Trigon picks up Ness by his neck...
TRIGON
You said, Hades' Ignition?
Trigon then gets ready for a dark blast from his mouth...
TRIGON
How about Trigon's Blast!
The blast engulfs Ness...
TRIGON
(Watches as Ness falls from the air to the ground)
Hahaha.
As Ness sits up in pain next to some of the civilians...
NESS
(Not looking at them as he catches his breath)
Why are you still here?
Trigon slowly walks towards them...
ARELLA
(Fearful)
Do you see now?! Its hopeless.
NESS
(Looking at Trigon seriously but talking to Arella)
With no due respect, Shut The Fuck Up.
The civilians and Arella are left in shocked by the audacity Ness is displaying...
TRIGON
(Seeing Ness standing)
This is all you got Ness?
A few moments before...
RAVEN
(Eyes turn a glowing white)
Toji.
TOJI
Bet! Hey Wrath!
WRATH
(Toji vanishes in a dark aura)
Huh?
TOJI
(Appearing behind Wrath)
Kumite Blast!
This man Toji...hit him with a Hadouken at close range?
WRATH
(Sent flying towards as he's absorbed into the aura)
Aaaaaaah!
RAVEN
(Sending Wrath into a white portal)
Sealed.
And Raven's not even done...huh? Oh next scene...
NESS
(Smirks)
I'm not done yet.
A dark aura slowly covers half of Ness's body...
NESS
(The civilians watches him in shock)
Let me show you-
Just as Ness gets light aura around the other half of his body...
NESS
(Stops)
Battle over.
Just then light engulfs Ness and the next thing you see is Ness back to back with a powerful Raven, but now her outfit is white...
TRIGON
(Watches as Raven walks toward him)
Daughter.
However unfortunately for Trigon...
RAVEN
It's over, Father.
Just then, four pillars surround Trigon...
NESS
(Thinking to himself with a smirk on his face.)
She's going all out.
TRIGON
You think I'll let you-
It's too late his cocky ass should have moved from those...symbol engraved pillars before they even popped up, because now each is shooting a beam of light that's restricting Trigon's body...
RAVEN
(Holds arms out in front of her)
Azarath Metrion-
TRIGON
(Seeing the symbols appear on his body)
I won't let you seal...impossible!
RAVEN
(Eyes turn a glowing white)
Zenthos!
A giant white raven bird manifests from her and appears above her before flying at Trigon, like a brave bird pokemon move...
TRIGON
(Feeling the painful impact as the raven flies through him)
Aaaaaaaauuuuuuughhh!
And with that another end as Trigon's body starts breaking down like a statue…
However, it looks like Ness isn't through with Trigon...
TRIGON
I lost. How?
NESS
(Smirking at him)
Because of your daughter. Hope you see some of these reasons why I love her.
The two stand there...
NESS
(Serious)
Trigon.
TRIGON
What do you want?
Later after Trigon's body is gone...
NESS
(Walks to Raven)
Just talking to your pops, man to man.
Ness walks away from a confused Raven...
EXT. DAY
Outside right by Team Toji's ship...
ANGELA
(Sad hugging Raven)
Do you have to go so soon?
RAVEN
More missions besides-
?
(Serious)
Raven.
As mother and daughter now stand face to face...
ARELLA
(Bows in shame)
I'm uh...come back.
LAUREN
(Bows in shame as well)
I'm sorry, Cousin, please come back.
Silence...Silence...Silence...Sil-
RAVEN
(Calm)
I will, Arella, Lauren.
ANGELA
You better.
As the others bow to the ladies of Azarath...
ANGELA
(Serious)
Do right by her.
NESS
(Smiles)
I will.
Back on the ship...
Ms. MARVEL
(Curious)
So Ness how long will you be with us for?
NESS
(Shrugs calm)
For like a day or so. I'm actually seeing Red Fiend's team next.
SPIDER-MAN AND STATIC
(Sad)
Aww.
TOJI
(Calm yet annoyed)
So I'm chopped liver now?
MS.MARVEL, SPIDER-MAN AND STATIC
(Fearful)
No!
NESS
(Smiles)
On some seriousness, y'all did great? If Trigon wasn't around Team Toji would have not needed me. However...
Although there's praise, the happy atmosphere is now more serious...
NESS
(Serious)
I hope y'all learned off of the first battle, that you want to be alert for anything and that charging head first ain't always the wave.
BMS: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09
The rookies nod in understanding.
NESS
Good, for now everyone it's time to rest.
Justice League Galactic
A Fanfiction Written by…
Fo$t Da Writer
OC's
Fo$T Da Writer
Ness
Toji Chan
XxTributomxX
Zara Larson
Red Fiend
Red Fiend
Justice League Galactic
END
INT. DAY
Back at Azarath's church...
ARELLA
(Serious)
Lauren, Angela, I was wrong.
LAUREN
(Concerned)
Aunt Arella...
ARELLA
(Calmly cries)
No, I was horrible, you all deserve better.
ANGELA
(Puts a hand on her shoulder )
Just do better now. Raven always believed in you and even now.
ARELLA
(Fearful as more tears fall)
But I-
ANGELA
You know, Ness almost fell down a similar path.
ARELLA AND LAUREN
(Shocked)
What?!
ANGELA
(Smirks)
Yep, but Raven saved him.
ARELLA
(Smiles with Lauren)
Brother was right in the end. These girls are special.
Angela nods in understanding...however curiosity...
ARELLA
(Curious)
You gonna tell her?
ANGELA
(Smirks)
Where's the fun in that?
END
