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Chapter 4: Echoes of Power

  Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of its characters. All rights belong to Masashi Kishimoto and the respective publishers. This is a work of fanfiction written for entertainment purposes only.

  Chapter 4: Echoes of Power

  The leaf wobbled, spun twice, then fluttered to the tatami mat.

  "Almost," I muttered, reaching to retrieve it. The past year had been a series of small victories and frustrating plateaus with this exercise. My progress, while noticeable, remained painfully slow.

  I repositioned myself on the floor, folding my legs beneath me in an approximation of Itachi's formal seiza position. A posture my two-and-a-half-year-old body found easier than it had a year ago. Morning sunlight streamed through the window, illuminating dust motes that danced in the air as I focused all my attention on the task.

  The basic leaf exercise taught to Academy students was simple enough, make a leaf stick to your skin using chakra. I'd mastered that part months ago, able to keep one attached to my forehead for nearly a minute.

  But what Itachi had shown me that day in the park was far more advanced, making the leaf spin using precise chakra control. That level of finesse still eluded me despite a year of dedicated practice.

  Channel chakra to your palm. Create a rotation. Make it spin.

  My young chakra network responded sluggishly to my commands. My mother had kept her promise to visit the park regularly, and each encounter with Itachi had provided invaluable observation opportunities. Without those repeated exposures to his refined chakra control, I doubted I'd have made even this much progress.

  I'd discovered something fascinating about my ability: the adaptations it created seemed temporary at first, fading within days unless reinforced through repeated exposure or practice.

  Only with consistent reinforcement did the changes begin to stabilize. Each time I watched Itachi practice, my chakra pathways would adapt slightly, retaining more of the pattern with each exposure.

  "Still working with your leaf, Ren-chan?" my mother commented as she passed through the living room, arms full of freshly laundered tablecloths for the restaurant.

  "I can make it spin longer today," I replied, keeping my words simple. At my current age, slightly more developed speech wouldn't raise eyebrows, but I still kept my vocabulary within what seemed reasonable for a precocious toddler.

  My mother smiled indulgently. "You're so persistent. Just like Uchiha-san's boy." She continued toward the stairs, her chakra flowing in the smooth, consistent patterns I'd known since my earliest memories. My mother's signature was as familiar to me as her voice steady, warm, and distinctively hers.

  Alone again, I returned my focus to the leaf. What I'd felt during Itachi's demonstration remained clear in my memory. The precise way his chakra formed a gentle spiral, creating just enough force to make the leaf spin. When I'd touched the leaf, my own chakra had briefly mimicked his control, giving me a tantalizing glimpse of what was possible.

  Focus. Gentle rotation. Steady flow.

  I gathered my chakra, feeling it respond more readily than it had months ago. Unlike Itachi's refined control, mine still felt like trying to direct mist with a fan. The general direction could be influenced, but precision remained elusive.

  As I concentrated, my thoughts drifted to the knowledge that weighed on me constantly. The burden of foreseeing tragedies you can't prevent. For the past year, I'd wrestled with the question of whether I should try to change the future I knew was coming.

  The Nine-Tails attack weighed heaviest on my mind. I knew it would happen soon, Minato becoming Hokage had been the marker. But what could I possibly do? Who would believe a toddler's warnings?

  And if by some miracle someone did take me seriously, the questions that would follow would be impossible to answer. How did I know? Was I somehow connected to the coming attack?

  Such scrutiny would be far more dangerous than remaining silent. At best, I'd be dismissed as having an overactive imagination. At worst, I'd be viewed as suspicious, possibly connected to whatever forces threatened the village. Neither outcome would prevent the attack.

  The sound of pots clanging downstairs signaled my father beginning preparations for the day. Soon the restaurant would open, and my morning practice session would end. Determined to make one final attempt, I closed my eyes and focused more deeply on my chakra.

  I'd refined my awareness of my own chakra network considerably. I could feel it flowing through my body in intricate pathways, responding to my concentration by gathering in my palm. The sensation was warm, like holding a small, invisible flame.

  Steady now...

  The leaf rose half an inch above my palm, rotating smoothly for nearly ten seconds before my concentration wavered and it fluttered down.

  Ten seconds! A personal best. Nowhere near what a trained shinobi could manage, but remarkable progress for someone my age. Especially without formal instruction.

  I allowed myself a moment of satisfaction before turning my attention to the leaf-sticking exercise. Placing the leaf on my forehead, I channeled chakra to that spot, creating the adhesion that would keep it in place. The leaf stayed firmly attached for over a minute before I released it, another small victory in my gradual development.

  "Ren-chan! Breakfast is ready!" my father called from downstairs.

  I carefully tucked the leaf into the pocket of my small yukata and made my way to the stairs. Moving around had become second nature over the past year, though I still found the limitations of my young body frustrating compared to my adult memories.

  The stairs remained a challenge, requiring concentration as I descended one careful step at a time, gripping the railing with both hands. My mother often offered to carry me, but I insisted on doing it myself whenever possible. Every bit of independence felt like a victory against my physical limitations.

  The restaurant kitchen greeted me with familiar aromas. Today's breakfast preparation of tamago kake gohan, with the rich scent of raw egg mixed with hot rice, soy sauce, and a hint of dashi. My father worked at the stove, his movements practiced and efficient. Pans hung in neat rows along the wall, ingredients sat prepared in small dishes, and the morning light slanted through the small window, illuminating rising steam in golden shafts.

  "There's my little ninja," he said with a gentle smile, using the nickname he'd given me after noticing my fascination with the shinobi who visited our restaurant. "How did training go this morning?"

  "Ten seconds, Tou-san," I reported proudly, holding up both hands with fingers splayed to emphasize the number. "New record."

  "Ten seconds?" He whistled appreciatively while setting a small bowl of the egg-covered rice before me. "That's impressive. Perhaps we're raising a future shinobi, though I hope you'll at least learn to cook proper ramen first."

  My father had no idea how precisely his casual comment aligned with my aspirations. Becoming a shinobi wasn't just a childhood fantasy for me, it was a necessary step for survival in this world. The knowledge I carried of future events meant nothing if I couldn't act on it, and for that, I needed power.

  Breakfast today was comforting and hearty. The warm, creamy egg mixture coating each grain of rice perfectly, with a sprinkle of dried nori and a side of pickled vegetables adding bright notes of flavor. My chopstick skills were improving daily, though I still occasionally resorted to a more appropriate spoon for my age.

  My mother joined us halfway through, having finished arranging the dining room for opening. She carried the scent of fresh linen with her, having spent the morning preparing the restaurant tables.

  "Kenji-kun will be bringing the Akimichi delivery this morning," she remarked to my father. "They're sending extra pork belly and shiitake for the evening rush."

  "Good. We've been busy all week." My father turned to me. "You like Kenji, don't you? He's been teaching you those funny hand gestures."

  I nodded eagerly. For as long as I could remember, Kenji had been a fixture at the restaurant, delivering supplies several times a week. The teenager was still a genin, having mentioned hopes for the Chunin Exams last year but apparently not quite making the cut. Each interaction gave me valuable exposure to trained shinobi chakra, and occasionally he'd demonstrate simple jutsu or hand signs when my parents weren't looking.

  After breakfast, I helped in the small ways I could. Carrying napkins to the tables, arranging chopsticks, and generally making myself useful without getting underfoot. My parents appreciated these efforts, though I suspected they found them more amusing than helpful.

  As the restaurant prepared to open, I settled into my customary observation spot near the kitchen entrance. A small cushioned area had been set up for me, complete with a few books and toys that I largely ignored in favor of watching the restaurant operations.

  From this vantage point, I could observe both the kitchen and part of the dining area, studying the business and the chakra signatures of customers. A skill that had sharpened considerably over the past year.

  The first customers arrived precisely at eleven, when the doors officially opened. Mostly regulars like an elderly couple who came every Friday, a few shopkeepers from nearby businesses taking an early lunch, and a pair of off-duty chunin who frequented our establishment. I recognized them all not just by sight but by their distinctive chakra patterns, each as unique as a fingerprint to my developing senses.

  I found myself glancing toward the large corner table that Akimichi Chōza usually occupied when he visited. It remained empty today, which wasn't entirely unusual, his visits were regular but not daily. Still, I felt a slight disappointment. His powerful, refined chakra was always fascinating to observe, and his absence today left me wondering if he was away on a mission or busy with clan matters.

  I'd overheard my father mentioning to my mother last week that Chōza's wife was expecting their first child soon. Perhaps today he was attending to family matters. Another connection to the new generation that would someday reshape this village alongside me.

  Would this be Chōji? The timeline matched what I remembered. The kind-hearted boy who would one day stand alongside Shikamaru and Ino, forming the next generation of the legendary Ino-Shika-Chō formation. The thought of Chōza with a child so close to my own age was an intriguing one, especially knowing who that child might become.

  Later, the back door opened to admit Kenji, wearing his leaf headband with obvious pride. He carried several crates stacked high, using chakra to enhance his strength, a basic technique I'd observed carefully whenever he made deliveries. His hair had grown longer since I'd first become aware of him, now tied back in a short ponytail, and a new scar marked his left forearm, probably from a recent mission.

  "Morning, Takashi-san!" Kenji called cheerfully as he navigated through the back door. "Special delivery from Akimichi-sama."

  "Kenji-kun, what would we do without you?" My father emerged from the kitchen, wiping his hands on a towel. "How is your training going? Any exciting missions lately?"

  "Just D-ranks mostly," Kenji replied with a touch of resignation. "Had one C-rank last month, but it was just escorting a merchant to the next town. Nothing exciting." He shrugged with the forced nonchalance of a teenager trying to hide disappointment. "Sensei says I need more practice before the next Chunin Exams."

  His eyes lit up when he spotted me. "Hey there, little Ren! Still practicing those hand signs I showed you?"

  I attempted to form the bird seal with my pudgy fingers, but my fine motor control wasn't quite there yet. My thumb kept slipping out of position, and my ring and pinky fingers refused to stay together, making a proper seal impossible. Still, I concentrated with a serious expression that made Kenji laugh.

  "That's the spirit!" he encouraged, kneeling down to my level. "Your fingers will get stronger with practice. Took me years to get them right."

  He adjusted my fingers gently, showing how they should be positioned. "Like this, see? Bird, then boar..."

  I tried again, my clumsy attempts barely recognizable as the proper forms, but earning Kenji's enthusiastic approval nonetheless.

  "You've got potential, kid," he said, ruffling my hair. "Maybe you'll be a shinobi someday."

  I felt a surge of determination. I would be. I had to be, if I wanted any hope of influencing the events to come.

  After Kenji left, promising to show me a new hand sign next time, the morning service picked up. The lunch rush brought in a diverse crowd. Villagers from various walks of life mingling in the comfortable atmosphere my parents had cultivated. I observed them all, cataloging details and chakra signatures, building my understanding of Konoha's civilian population.

  My mother brought me a small lunch on a tray. A child-sized portion of cold soba noodles, garnished with scallions and served with a light dipping sauce. I ate slowly, savoring each bite while continuing my observation. The restaurant operated like a well-choreographed dance, my parents moving in practiced patterns around each other, serving customers with efficiency and warmth.

  After lunch, as the crowd thinned, my mother moved me to my afternoon spot behind the counter where I could continue watching while staying out of the way during cleanup. She provided me with paper and crayons, ostensibly for drawing, though I often used this time to practice writing when no one was looking closely. Today, however, I decided to actually draw, creating a childish rendition of a leaf spinning above a hand. Simple enough to seem age-appropriate, but meaningful to me.

  "What are you drawing, Ren-chan?" my mother asked, pausing in her work to glance at my paper.

  "Leaf spinning," I replied, adding a swirl of green to indicate rotation.

  She smiled. "That's very good. You really like that leaf game, don't you?"

  I nodded seriously. "Want to be good at it."

  "You're certainly determined." She ruffled my hair affectionately before returning to her tasks.

  The afternoon passed quietly, with only a few customers trickling in for late lunches or early dinners. My father used this lull to prepare for the evening service, chopping vegetables with practiced precision, marinating meats, and preparing stocks for various dishes. The rhythmic sound of his knife against the cutting board was oddly comforting, a soundtrack to the peaceful routine of our days.

  Throughout the evening, more customers arrived, creating a pleasant buzz of conversation and activity. A group of craftsmen from the nearby furniture district took the large corner table, celebrating the completion of a major commission. Several couples occupied the smaller tables, enjoying intimate dinners in the warm atmosphere. And along the counter, individual diners savored my father's cooking while exchanging casual conversation with him as he worked.

  "Are you tired, Ren-chan?" my mother asked later, noticing me rubbing my eyes. "It's been a long day."

  I nodded, though fatigue wasn't the only issue. There was something odd in the air tonight, a heaviness that my developing senses couldn't quite identify.

  "I'll take him upstairs," my mother told my father. "It's past his bedtime anyway."

  My father nodded, busy with the evening customers. "I'll close up. You two get some rest."

  My mother lifted me into her arms, and I settled against her shoulder, inhaling the familiar scent of jasmine that clung to her clothes. As she carried me through the restaurant, I took one last look at the peaceful scene. Customers enjoying their meals, my father working with practiced efficiency, cooking and moving between tables with grace. The normalcy of it all felt suddenly precious, as if some part of me sensed the impending disruption.

  As we climbed the stairs to our living quarters, I felt a subtle change in the air. A heaviness, a pressure that seemed to press against my chakra senses. My mother didn't appear to notice anything unusual as she carried me to the bathroom to help me wash before bed.

  The nighttime routine was comforting in its familiarity. Washing my face and hands, brushing my teeth with assistance, changing into sleeping clothes. All the while, that strange pressure continued to build, creating an increasing discomfort that I struggled to hide.

  "You're very quiet tonight," my mother observed as she helped me into a sleeping yukata. "Are you feeling alright?"

  "Just tired," I mumbled, which wasn't entirely untrue. The effort of maintaining awareness of the growing pressure was exhausting.

  She nodded, though her eyes held a hint of concern. "Well, a good night's sleep will help. Come, let's get you to bed."

  Our small apartment above the restaurant was modestly furnished but comfortable, with traditional tatami flooring and sliding doors separating the rooms. My bedroom was tiny but had a window overlooking a quiet side street, moonlight now streaming through to create patterns on the floor.

  My mother prepared my futon, smoothing the blankets and fluffing the small pillow. I settled in, my mind racing despite my body's fatigue. Something felt wrong about tonight, the pressure in the air, a sense of foreboding I couldn't explain.

  "Sleep well, Ren-chan," my mother said softly, brushing hair from my forehead. "I'll be downstairs helping your father close the restaurant."

  I nodded, closing my eyes as if ready for sleep. But the moment she slid the door closed, I opened them again, staring at the ceiling as I extended my senses outward. The pressure was definitely increasing, particularly from the direction of the village center. It felt like a storm gathering, not in the sky, but in the very chakra of the village itself.

  I must have dozed off despite my unease, because the next thing I knew, I was jolted awake by a sensation so overwhelming it felt like being submerged in boiling oil.

  My entire nervous system seemed to catch fire at once, and I screamed, a sound that tore from my throat before I could stop it.

  My bedroom door slid open with a bang as my mother rushed in, her face pale with alarm.

  "Ren! What's wrong?" Her voice was frantic, but I could barely hear her over the roaring in my ears.

  I couldn't answer. The sensation was like nothing I'd ever sensed…ancient, primal, a chakra so dense and powerful it made the air itself feel heavy. But beyond the raw power was something more complex, a maelstrom of emotions that assaulted my senses. Rage dominated, a fury so intense it felt like physical heat scorching my chakra pathways.

  Beneath that burned confusion, as if this tremendous force had been suddenly wrenched from slumber into violent action. And deeper still, almost hidden beneath the surface emotions, lay something that felt surprisingly like pain, and helplessness.

  My body convulsed as another wave hit, stronger than the first. This time, I could feel my own chakra network responding in a way it never had before. Pathways dilating, contracting, frantically trying to process the foreign energy washing over the entire village.

  My mother gathered me in her arms, her touch cool against my suddenly burning skin.

  "Takashi!" she screamed toward the stairs. "Something's wrong with Ren!"

  I tried to speak, to warn her, but all that emerged was another strangled cry as pain lanced through my skull. The burning behind my eyes intensified until it felt like my very orbits were filled with molten lead.

  My father appeared at the doorway, his face pale with alarm.

  "What's happening?" he asked, rushing to my side. "Is he sick?"

  That's when we heard it…a distant roar that seemed to shake the very foundations of the building. A sound no human throat could produce.

  We all froze, the moment suspended in sudden, terrible comprehension.

  An explosion rocked the village, distant but powerful enough to rattle the windows in their frames. In the momentary silence that followed, I felt something shift in my chakra network.

  The pain behind my eyes peaked, then transformed into a different sensation. A humming vibration that spread from my optical nerves throughout my chakra system. With it came a new awareness, a heightened sensitivity to something in the overwhelming presence now saturating the village.

  Through the window, an orange glow illuminated the night sky, reflecting off distant clouds and painting the interior of our home in an eerie light.

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  "Kami above," my father whispered, moving to the window. "What's happening?"

  Another roar shattered the night, closer this time. Screams erupted from the street outside as civilians began to understand that something terrible had been unleashed upon Konoha.

  I struggled in my mother's arms, desperate to see, to confirm what I already knew. She turned instinctively toward the window, and that's when I saw it. A massive form rising above the village skyline, tails lashing against buildings and trees. A monstrous fox, mammoth and terrible, its chakra a visible miasma that distorted the air around it.

  "We need to get to the shelter," my father said, his voice steady despite the fear I could sense in his chakra. "Now."

  My mother nodded, clutching me tighter as my father grabbed a pre-packed emergency bag from the closet. A habit that was about to prove its worth. He added a few additional items with swift efficiency like a water canteen, a small medical kit, an extra blanket.

  "The civilian shelter in the mountainside," he said. "That's where they'll direct evacuees."

  We hurried down the stairs, my father leading the way. The restaurant below was empty now, the last customers having fled at the first signs of trouble. Dishes sat abandoned on tables, meals half-eaten, chairs overturned in the haste of departure.

  My father paused only long enough to grab the cash box and lock it in the small safe beneath the counter, a reflexive action born of years of business ownership. Then we were moving toward the door, stepping out into a night transformed by panic and fear.

  Outside was chaos. People ran in all directions despite the efforts of chunin trying to direct evacuation. The distant form of the fox loomed larger now, one massive paw crushing a building as casually as a child might knock over a toy.

  "This way," a chunin called, waving toward one of the evacuation routes. "Civilian shelter in the mountain! Move quickly but stay calm!"

  My father took my mother's arm, guiding us into the flow of evacuees. All around us, civilians clutched children and precious belongings, their faces masks of terror. Overhead, I caught glimpses of shinobi leaping across rooftops, heading toward the danger rather than away from it.

  I was still in agony, my chakra network feeling like it was being rewritten by the mere presence of the massive beast. The strange humming behind my eyes continued, building in intensity until my vision seemed to pulse with each wave.

  "Tou-san…fourth…danger," I managed to croak, my vocabulary failing me as pain overwhelmed my senses. "man…bad."

  My mother and father exchanged alarmed glances, clearly disturbed by both my words and my deteriorating condition.

  Another massive surge of chakra rolled over the village, different this time. Powerful but not malevolent. The Fourth Hokage had entered the battle.

  The strange sensation behind my eyes intensified again. I could feel my chakra responding to the fox's presence, attempting to adapt to the overwhelming power by restructuring pathways throughout my system. The burning had given way to a vibrating pressure that seemed to build with each passing moment.

  "Takashi, he's burning up," my mother said with alarm, placing a hand on my forehead as we paused briefly at an intersection. "This isn't normal fear."

  "Feel it," I managed to say, my voice eerily calm for a moment despite the agony. "The fox's chakra... so angry... so sad..."

  My parents stared at me in confusion and growing fear. No normal two-year-old should be talking about chakra or understanding what was happening.

  I was shaking violently now, fine tremors running through my small frame as my system struggled to process what was happening. I tried to focus, to gain some control over my response, but the fox's chakra was too overwhelming, too alien for my developing network to handle.

  Another explosion rocked the village, closer this time. The crowd around us surged forward in panic. In the chaos, I glimpsed a figure in a black cloak on a distant rooftop, just for an instant before it vanished.

  The reminder that someone was controlling this attack sent another spike of panic through me. I struggled to point, to shout a warning, but my body betrayed me again. Another convulsion, stronger than before, my back arching as pain lanced through my chakra network.

  "Ren!" My mother's voice broke with fear.

  Through swimming vision, I saw the concern on my parents' faces transform to shock. My mother gasped, her hand flying to her mouth.

  "Takashi, his eyes—!"

  Whatever she saw reflected in my eyes, I couldn't know. But the pressure behind them had become almost unbearable, as if something was trying to push outward from within.

  My father's expression shifted from concern to determination. "We need to get him to the hospital now."

  "But the evacuation…"

  "Look at him, Kaori! This isn't normal fear. Something's wrong with our son."

  Around us, the evacuation continued, civilians streaming toward the mountain shelters while the sounds of battle grew more intense behind us. My father made a split-second decision, scooping me from my mother's arms.

  "The hospital is this way. It should still be staffed for emergencies."

  We broke away from the evacuation route, my father carrying me while my mother followed close behind. Each step jolted through my oversensitized system. The roars seemed to synchronize with the pulsing behind my eyes, as if the beast's rage was somehow resonating with whatever was happening to me.

  I tried to focus through the pain, to stay conscious, but darkness was creeping in at the edges of my vision. The last thing I saw was my mother's face, illuminated by an orange glow from the distant destruction, her eyes wide with a fear that transcended even the terror of the attack.

  "His eyes," she whispered again, her voice fading as consciousness slipped away from me. "They're glowing red..."

  Darkness claimed me, carrying me away from the night of fire and death, away from the beast whose chakra had somehow changed me in ways I wouldn't understand until much later.

  The last thing I felt was my chakra network completing some fundamental shift, cementing a change that would alter my path in this world forever.

  Beeping. Rhythmic, persistent beeping.

  That was the first thing I became aware of as consciousness gradually returned. The sound was mechanical, regular intervals that marked time in the darkness behind my closed eyelids.

  Hospital. I'm in a hospital.

  The realization brought with it fragmented memories. Screaming, running, blinding pain, and something massive wreaking destruction across the village.

  I tried to open my eyes, but my lids felt impossibly heavy. My entire body seemed disconnected, like I was floating just slightly above it rather than fully inhabiting it. There was pain too, a dull throb behind my eyes and a strange tingling throughout my chakra pathways.

  "...still showing unusual readings in his chakra system."

  The voice came from somewhere nearby, muffled as if I were underwater. I strained to listen.

  "Is it dangerous?" My mother's voice, tight with worry.

  "We don't believe so. His pathways are stabilizing, though there's been significant disruption. It's as if his system experienced some kind of shock." The medical voice didn't elaborate further; the cause was obvious to everyone.

  A medical ninja, then. I concentrated harder, trying to force my eyes open to see who was speaking.

  "How long until he wakes up?" My father this time, his normally calm voice strained.

  "It's hard to say. He's been unconscious for three days, but his brain activity is strong. The fever has broken, which is a positive sign."

  Three days. I'd been unconscious for three days. Which meant...

  With tremendous effort, I finally managed to crack my eyes open, immediately regretting it as harsh hospital light speared into my retinas. I groaned softly, the sound escaping before I could stop it.

  "Ren!" My mother's face appeared above me, her features drawn with exhaustion and relief. "He's awake! Takashi, he's awake!"

  My father's face joined hers in my narrow field of vision. "Goodness. Ren-chan, can you hear us?"

  I tried to nod, but even that small movement sent waves of dizziness through me. Instead, I focused on forming words with my dry, uncooperative lips.

  "Water," I managed to croak, my throat feeling like sandpaper.

  My mother immediately held a cup with a straw to my lips, supporting my head slightly as I sipped. The cool liquid was the most delicious thing I'd ever tasted.

  "I'll inform the medical staff," said a voice I couldn't see, followed by the sound of footsteps leaving the room.

  As my vision gradually cleared, I took in my surroundings. I was in what appeared to be a large community room in the hospital, with numerous beds and cots arranged in rows. Many were occupied by patients with various injuries, some with family members anxiously hovering nearby. Medical ninja moved quickly between beds, their expressions tense with exhaustion as they tried to keep up with the overwhelming number of patients.

  Through a window across the room, I could see the warm glow of late afternoon sunlight. From my position, I could hear groans of pain, whispered conversations, and the occasional sharp orders from medical staff dealing with more critical cases.

  "What happened?" I asked.

  My parents exchanged a look that contained volumes of unspoken concern.

  "There was an attack on the village," my father said carefully, obviously choosing his words with a two-year-old's understanding in mind. "A... monster. But the Fourth Hokage defeated it, and we're safe now."

  "You became very sick during the attack," my mother added, squeezing my hand gently. "The medics say your body reacted strongly to... to what was happening." She hesitated, then continued with deliberate casualness. "Do you remember anything, Ren-chan?"

  The question wasn't as innocent as it sounded. I could sense her tension, the careful way she watched my face as she asked. They had seen something. My eyes glowing red, according to my last memory before losing consciousness. They wanted to know if I was aware of what had happened to me.

  I considered my options carefully. Complete denial would seem suspicious given how articulate I'd been during the attack. Claiming full awareness might lead to uncomfortable questions I couldn't answer. A middle ground seemed safest.

  "Big fox," I whispered, allowing fear to show in my voice. "Scary. Eyes hurt." I wasn't exactly lying, but it didn't make me feel good keeping things from them.

  Their expressions softened slightly with relief. Whatever they'd feared, perhaps that I'd been possessed or permanently changed, my childlike response seemed to reassure them that I was still their son.

  "Yes, there was a big fox," my father confirmed. "But it's gone now, and you're going to be fine."

  I tried to sit up slightly, but found my body uncooperatively weak. My mother immediately adjusted the pillow behind me, helping me into a more upright position. The movement sent another wave of dizziness through me, but it passed quickly.

  "Hungry," I said, which was true. After three days unconscious, my stomach felt completely empty.

  "The nurse said you might have some broth when you woke up," my mother said. "I'll go ask if it's ready."

  As she left, navigating carefully through the crowded room, my father settled onto the edge of my bed. He looked exhausted, with dark circles under his eyes and a day's growth of stubble on his usually clean-shaven face. His clothes were rumpled, suggesting he'd been wearing them for some time.

  "You gave us quite a scare, Ren-chan," he said softly, taking my small hand in his much larger one. "We were so worried."

  I squeezed his fingers weakly. "Sorry."

  He shook his head. "It wasn't your fault. No one knows why some people were affected so strongly by... by what happened." He paused, choosing his words carefully. "The medics say there were several others who had unusual reactions."

  That was interesting. Other people had been affected? I wondered if they had experienced something similar to what had happened to me, or if their reactions had been different. Given the uniqueness of my ability, I doubted anyone else had responded exactly as I had.

  Before I could ponder further, the door opened to admit a woman in a white medical coat. She had short brown hair and the focused expression I associated with medical professionals. More importantly, she wore a hitai-ate.

  "So our young patient is awake," she said, her voice professional but kind despite clear exhaustion. "I'm Hayashi-sensei. How are you feeling, Ren-kun?"

  "Tired," I said truthfully. "Head hurts."

  She nodded, approaching the bed and checking my pulse manually. Likely conserving chakra rather than using a diagnostic jutsu. "That's to be expected. You've been through quite an ordeal." She produced a small penlight from her pocket. "I need to check your eyes. This might be bright for a moment."

  I tensed involuntarily. My eyes. Whatever had happened to them during the attack, this examination might reveal something. But I had no choice except to cooperate.

  Hayashi-sensei gently lifted my eyelid and shone the light into my left eye, then my right. I watched her face carefully for any reaction, but her expression remained professionally neutral.

  "Pupils equal and reactive," she noted, clicking off the light. "Good color."

  Good color. That seemed significant. Whatever redness my mother had seen, it wasn't visible now.

  "I'll do a quick diagnostic scan, if that's alright," she said, forming a hand seal. Her fingers began to glow with the soft green light of medical chakra.

  I felt a gentle warmth as she passed her hands a few inches above my body, the sensation similar to sunlight on skin. The diagnostic jutsu was painless, but I could feel it interacting with my chakra network, like ripples spreading through water where a pebble has been dropped.

  "Hmm," she murmured, her brow furrowing slightly as her hands hovered over my head, then my chest.

  "Is something wrong?" my father asked, tension evident in his voice.

  Hayashi-sensei completed her scan before answering. "His chakra network is... unusual. Not necessarily in a bad way," she added quickly, seeing my father's expression. "But it shows signs of significant disruption, particularly around the optical pathways."

  "What does that mean?" My father's grip on my hand tightened slightly.

  "It means his system responded to the Nine-Tails' chakra in a unique way," she explained. "Children's chakra networks are still developing, so they can be more sensitive to external influences. Ren-kun appears to have experienced a more pronounced reaction than most."

  My mother returned at that moment, carefully carrying a small bowl of clear broth. She caught the end of the medic's explanation and frowned.

  "But he will recover completely, won't he?" she asked, moving to stand beside my father.

  Hayashi-sensei smiled reassuringly. "I believe so. His vital signs are good. He'll need to rest and recover his strength, but I see no reason why he won't make a full recovery."

  The answer should have been comforting, but I noted her careful phrasing. She believed I would recover, but there was a degree of uncertainty there. And she hadn't directly addressed whether the changes in my chakra network would be permanent.

  "His pathways are stabilizing," she continued, addressing my parents. "The fever is gone, and his vitals are stable."

  "What exactly happened to him?" my father asked, the question clearly one he'd posed before.

  Hayashi-sensei hesitated, choosing her words carefully. "We've seen several cases like this following the attack. The Nine-Tails' chakra was... profound. Some sensitive individuals, particularly children, experienced adverse reactions to its presence."

  "But why did his eyes…" my mother began, then stopped as my father placed a warning hand on her arm.

  The medic's expression sharpened with interest. "Yes, you mentioned something about his eyes when you brought him in. Could you describe what you saw again?"

  My heartbeat accelerated. This was clearly information of special interest to the medical ninja.

  "They looked... red," my mother said hesitantly. "Not bloodshot, but glowing almost. Just for a moment before he lost consciousness."

  Hayashi-sensei nodded, making a note on her clipboard. "Interesting. We've observed temporary chakra manifestations in a few other cases. The eyes often reflect chakra disruptions most visibly." She smiled reassuringly. "In most cases, these effects are temporary responses to extreme chakra exposure."

  Most cases. But not all. The implication hung unspoken in the air.

  "Will it happen again?" my father asked bluntly.

  "It's hard to say with certainty," Hayashi-sensei replied. "But as his system stabilizes, any unusual effects should diminish. I'd like to schedule a follow-up examination in two weeks."

  My mother handed me the bowl of broth, helping me hold it as my hands were still shaky. "Try to eat something, Ren-chan. You need to build up your strength."

  The liquid was mild but flavorful, some kind of chicken stock with subtle seasonings. It felt wonderful on my parched throat, and I realized just how hungry I was. I tried not to gulp it down too quickly, but my body's needs overrode my patience.

  "Slow down a little," my mother advised with a small smile. "We don't want you getting sick."

  I nodded, forcing myself to take smaller sips as she continued to help me. My father watched in silence, relief evident in his expression but concern still lurking in his eyes.

  Hayashi-sensei finished making notes on her clipboard. "I need to check on other patients. We're... quite overwhelmed, as you can see." She gestured to the packed room. "I'll try to come back later, but if his condition changes, have one of the nurses find me immediately."

  "Thank you, Hayashi-sensei," my father said, standing to bow slightly.

  After she left, hurrying to another bed where a nurse was calling for assistance, my parents relaxed slightly.

  "She says you're going to be just fine," my mother said, smoothing my hair back from my forehead. "You gave us such a fright, Ren-chan."

  I nodded, letting my genuine exhaustion show. "What happened to the big fox?"

  My father settled back onto the edge of my bed. "The Fourth Hokage stopped it. He... he gave his life to save the village."

  So it had happened just as I remembered. I felt a wave of sadness, knowing what that sacrifice meant. Not just for the Fourth and his wife, but for their son who would grow up an orphan, bearing a burden he didn't choose.

  "The village is in mourning," my mother added softly. "Many people were lost. But we're alive, and that's what matters most."

  I thought I detected a slight hitch in my father's breathing at these words, a flicker of pain crossing his face. Had someone they knew been among the casualties? I wanted to ask, but something in his expression made me hold back.

  I closed my eyes briefly, feeling the weight of my foreknowledge. I had known this would happen and had been powerless to change anything. The frustration of that reality burned almost as much as the lingering pain behind my eyes.

  "Can I have more water?" I asked, partly because my throat was still dry, but also to gain a moment to compose myself.

  As my mother held a cup for me again, I became aware of the chaos of the hospital room around us. Medical staff rushed between beds, treating wounds and stabilizing patients. Civilians with minor injuries sat on benches along the walls, waiting their turn for treatment. Family members clustered around beds, some weeping quietly, others speaking in hushed, anxious tones.

  I let my senses expand cautiously, testing my new awareness. To my astonishment, I could detect chakra signatures throughout the entire hospital wing. Before the attack, my sensory range had been limited to the same room or perhaps just beyond. Now I could distinguish individual signatures, feel the ebb and flow of chakra through different bodies, even sense the distinctive patterns of medical jutsu being performed several rooms away.

  It was overwhelming, this sudden expansion of awareness. I closed my eyes, partially to hide my reaction and partially to help me focus on sorting through the flood of sensory input.

  The sheer variety of chakra signatures was staggering. The calm, disciplined energy of medical ninja working tirelessly to heal, the erratic patterns of injured patients, the subdued flows of exhausted family members. Each signature told a story, revealing aspects of its owner's condition and nature that I'd never been able to discern before.

  I must have made some sound or expression, because my mother's hand was suddenly on my forehead.

  "Are you in pain, Ren-chan?"

  I opened my eyes, forcing myself to appear drowsy rather than shocked. "Tired," I murmured, which wasn't entirely untrue. The effort of extending my senses so far had drained my already depleted reserves.

  "You should sleep," my father said. "We'll be right here."

  I nodded, allowing my eyes to close again. But my mind was racing. The changes to my sensory abilities were dramatic. Not only could I sense chakra at much greater distances, but I could discern far more detail than before. It was as if I'd gone from seeing blurry shapes to crystal clear images.

  I drifted in and out of sleep for the next few hours, my body's need for rest battling with my mind's need to process what had happened. Each time I woke, my parents were there, sometimes talking quietly to each other, sometimes in silence. Occasionally medical staff would pass by, checking on patients or administering treatments.

  During one period of wakefulness, I overheard a whispered conversation between my parents.

  "...not the only child affected," my father was saying. "The nurse mentioned several similar cases."

  "But the glowing eyes? Did the others have that too?" My mother's voice was tight with worry.

  "She wouldn't say specifically. Patient confidentiality."

  "Do you think it will happen again? His eyes, I mean."

  A pause. "I don't know. But if it does, we'll handle it. Ren is still Ren, no matter what."

  My mother made a soft sound of agreement, and I felt a wave of gratitude for their unconditional acceptance. Whatever had happened to me, whatever might happen in the future, they viewed me as their son first and foremost.

  By evening, I was strong enough to sit up properly and eat a more substantial meal. Rice porridge with small pieces of vegetable and soft tofu. The simple food tasted wonderful after three days without eating. My mother helped me, though I insisted on holding the spoon myself for a few bites, asserting my independence despite my weakened state.

  After dinner, as twilight darkened the sky outside the windows, I found myself alone with my father while my mother went to stretch her legs and find something for them to eat.

  "Tou-san," I said softly, "is the village okay?"

  He looked surprised by the question, then thoughtful. "Parts of it were damaged badly," he admitted. "But Konoha is strong. We'll rebuild."

  "Our home?"

  "Is fine," he assured me. "Our neighborhood wasn't hit. The restaurant will reopen in a few days, once things settle down."

  "Why did I get sick? When the fox came?" I asked.

  My father's expression became guarded. "The medics say some people are more sensitive to... to what happened. Especially children."

  "But why me?"

  He sighed, reaching out to smooth my hair. "I don't know, Ren-chan. Maybe you have special sensitivity to chakra. Hayashi-sensei mentioned that's not uncommon in children who might have talent as sensors later in life."

  That was interesting. The medical staff had already identified me as a potential sensor-type. It wasn't incorrect, but it wasn't the full truth either. My ability was something more unusual than simple chakra sensitivity.

  "Could I be a ninja someday?" I asked, maintaining the innocence of a child's question while fishing for information about how they viewed my potential.

  My father smiled faintly. "If that's what you want when you're older. But there's plenty of time to think about that. For now, you just need to focus on getting better."

  The door to the ward opened, admitting my mother and Hayashi-sensei. The medic looked even more tired than before, but she smiled when she saw me sitting up.

  "You're looking much better already," she said, approaching the bed. "How are you feeling now, Ren-kun?"

  "Better," I replied. "Still tired."

  "That's to be expected." She performed another quick examination, checking my eyes again with her penlight and running a brief diagnostic jutsu over my chakra network. "The readings are continuing to stabilize. I think we can plan for discharge tomorrow morning, provided you get through the night without any issues."

  My parents exchanged relieved glances.

  "I'm sorry we can't offer you more comfortable accommodations," Hayashi-sensei said with a glance around the crowded ward. "We're dealing with... well, you can see." She gestured to the many patients still requiring care.

  "We understand," my mother said quickly. "We're just grateful for the care you've given Ren."

  After the medic left, my mother shared a small bento she'd managed to procure from somewhere. My father ate mechanically, his mind clearly elsewhere. I noticed again that flicker of pain crossing his face when he thought no one was watching.

  As night fell fully outside the window, the hospital grew somewhat quieter, though the medical staff continued their rounds without pause. The overhead lights were dimmed, leaving only the soft glow of monitoring equipment illuminating the room. My mother arranged herself as comfortably as possible on a chair beside my bed, while my father leaned against the wall nearby.

  "Try to sleep," my mother told me softly. "We'll be right here if you need anything."

  I nodded, already feeling drowsiness overtaking me again. My body was working hard to recover, demanding more rest than usual. Before I drifted off completely, I pushed my awareness further, curious about its new boundaries.

  As I reached a section of the hospital where the emotions ran particularly intense, fear and grief radiating from a cluster of chakra signatures I felt something strange stirring within me. A faint warmth began to build behind my eyes, not painful but distinctly different. The sensation seemed to resonate with the emotional intensity I was sensing, as if responding to it.

  I immediately reined in my senses, my heart racing. Was this the precursor to what had happened during the attack? I closed my eyes tightly, trying to calm the unusual energy that had begun to flow through my optical pathways.

  When I finally dared to open them again, I caught my mother watching me with a carefully neutral expression. Had she noticed something? Her eyes held mine for a moment before she simply reached out to smooth my hair, saying nothing.

  That brief exploration left me with questions I couldn't yet answer. What exactly had happened to me? What caused my deep blue eyes to glow red? Was it the intensity of emotions, the nature of the chakra I sensed, or something about my own ability responding to danger? And how was I now able to sense chakra at such distances with such clarity?

  I fell asleep with these questions circling in my mind, determined to find answers once I recovered my strength.

  Whatever had awakened in me that night, whatever made my chakra twist and my eyes burn, I needed to master it.

  If I'm going to change anything, I need more than just knowledge. I need power. And I'll take it, however I can.

  A/N: This one's a monster. Both in length and content. I didn't initially plan for this chapter to be so long, but once I started exploring the Nine-Tails attack, it demanded space to breathe.

  We are past the point of no return now. The Nine-Tails has struck. Ren's body, and more importantly his chakra, has been pushed to its limits, and something inside him has permanently shifted.

  I wanted to explore what the attack on Konoha might have looked like through civilian eyes. What it would feel like when chakra on that scale floods a village full of people who were never meant to endure it. Ren's ability makes that sensory overload even more extreme, and we're only beginning to see the consequences.

  And yes, Ren's eyes glowed red. No, he's not unlocking the Sharingan! His ability is evolving in its own unique direction, and we're only just scratching the surface of what it can become.

  I'd love to know what you thought of this chapter:

  Was the Nine-Tails attack portrayed well from a civilian perspective?

  How do you feel about the changes happening to Ren?

  And what aspect of the story are you most curious about going forward?

  Thanks for reading! I hope to read some of your reviews to get my creativity flowing!

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