Since a couple of nice guys have given me heavenly advice, I will be rewriting the entire story, Don't worry, the plot is still the same.

  I will mass release them after I've finished.

  The author's content has been appropriated; report any instances of this story on Amazon.

  In the mean time, read some other stories. I'm advertising mine.

  Who knows? You might see an autistic manchild being transported into a video game world sometime.