Camden Town in London was always a whirlwind of
chaotic markets, quirky shops, and tourists who somehow
managed to walk just slowly enough to be in the way. It
was the kind of place where the odd and the unusual were
completely normal, where you could find almost anything
if you knew where to look – or if you were just lost
enough to stumble across it. For Alex Hopkins and Ravi
Gupta, Camden was familiar ground. They had spent
countless afternoons weaving through the crowds,
exploring every nook and cranny. It had become their
playground, their escape. Nothing ever truly surprised
them anymore – or so they thought.
Alex wasn’t exactly a typical 14-year-old. Sure, on the
surface, he fit in well enough – average kid from a
comfortable middle-class family, lived in a big house
with more rooms than anyone needed, got top grades. But
beneath all that, Alex carried the weight of unspoken
expectations. His parents, both successful doctors, had
always hinted at their dream of him following in their
footsteps. The problem? Alex had no clue what he
wanted to do with his life, and the idea of becoming a
doctor wasn’t exactly appealing. He found it suffocating,
like the walls of his large home were closing in on him.
Sure, it had a massive garden, but no amount of space
seemed to shake that feeling of being trapped.
His best friend, Ravi, couldn’t have been more
different. Where Alex was quiet and thoughtful, Ravi was
loud, carefree, and lived entirely in the moment. He came
1from a huge, boisterous family, where keeping track of
all his siblings was a task in itself – three brothers, three
sisters, and constant chaos. Their house, even bigger than
Alex’s, was bursting with noise, laughter, and the general
mayhem that comes with a family that large. But Ravi
thrived in it. He had a way of defusing tension with his
humour and a knack for finding the fun in even the most
stressful situations.
The two had been inseparable since their parents, who
worked at the same medical practice, had introduced
them years ago. Despite coming from similar
backgrounds, neither boy had any interest in following
their parents into the medical field. Ravi’s dad, like
Alex’s parents, had grand ideas about Ravi becoming a
doctor, but Ravi had other plans: plans that mainly
involved football and the slim hope of becoming a
professional player one day. He wasn’t very good, but
that didn’t stop him from dreaming. When he wasn’t
daydreaming about scoring the winning goal for England,
he was singing loudly and off-key, convinced he’d be the
next big thing in music – despite having no talent for it
whatsoever.
Ravi also had an insatiable appetite. If he wasn’t
cracking jokes or belting out tunes, he was eating. Crisps,
chocolate, kebabs, you name it – Ravi could put it away
like no one else. Alex often teased him that he must have
hollow legs, given how much he could eat without ever
gaining a pound. But beneath all the banter and chaos,
Ravi had a heart of gold. He may not have been the most
talented at football or singing, but his loyalty to Alex –
and their friendship – was unmatched.
Together, Alex and Ravi balanced each other out.
Where Alex tended to overthink everything, Ravi was
2always there to remind him to live in the moment. They
had navigated the ups and downs of being teenagers with
ease, their bond built on years of shared adventures,
inside jokes, and a silent agreement that no matter what,
they had each other’s backs.
But today was different. Alex couldn’t quite put his
finger on it, but as he wandered through the familiar
streets of Camden, something felt off. The usual activity
of the market seemed distant, and the air carried a
strange, heavy feeling. He tugged the hood of his grey
hoodie over his head and kept walking, trying to shake
the sense of unease that had settled over him.
He crossed the road near Camden Lock and headed
down a side street, one he and Ravi had taken a thousand
times before. Normally, they’d meet up here, grab
something to eat, and mess around for the afternoon. But
today, Ravi was late, leaving Alex to wander alone. As he
walked, hands shoved deep into his pockets, that strange
feeling of something being off grew stronger with every
step.
Then he saw it.
A door, set into the crumbling brick wall of the
alleyway. It wasn’t just any door; it looked ancient, like
something out of a medieval castle. The wood was thick
and dark, bound with heavy iron bars, and the handle was
an elaborate twist of metal, corroded with age. It was the
kind of door that didn’t belong in Camden or anywhere
else Alex had ever been. It stood there, solid and silent,
completely out of place.
Alex froze, staring at it. He had walked this alley a
thousand times and was sure there had never been a door
there before. Yesterday, the wall had been nothing more
than bricks covered in graffiti and old posters. But today,
3this door – this impossibly old door – stood in its place.
He stepped closer, hesitantly reaching out to touch the
rough wood. As his fingers brushed against it, a cold
shiver ran through him, like the door was alive with some
kind of energy, waiting for him.
Behind him, Ravi’s voice broke the silence. “Oi,
Alex!”
Alex turned to see Ravi walking towards him, a kebab
in one hand, his face smeared with sauce. “I told you ...
twelve,” Alex said, raising an eyebrow.
Ravi shrugged, taking another bite of his kebab.
“Yeah, twelve-ish.”
“Ish doesn’t mean half past, you know,” Alex shot
back, but his attention was quickly pulled back to the
door.
Ravi glanced at it too, his mouth full. “What’s that?”
“That,” Alex said slowly, “is a door.”
“I can see that,” Ravi muttered, eyes narrowing. “But
what is it doing here? It wasn’t there yesterday. Was it?”
“Nope.” Alex stepped aside so Ravi could get a closer
look. “It’s new.”
“Well, not new new obviously. It looks like it belongs
in a museum,” Ravi muttered.
“Exactly,” Alex said, pleased with their discovery.
They both stared at the door in silence for a moment,
and then Ravi leaned in, inspecting the iron handle. “Do
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you think we should open it?”
Alex didn’t answer right away. Everything in him was
screaming that this door wasn’t normal, but curiosity
gnawed at him. “I mean … doors are meant to be opened,
right?”
“That’s either the best reasoning or the worst I’ve ever
heard.”
4Before Alex could respond, Ravi reached for the
handle.
“Wait!” Alex snapped, grabbing his friend’s wrist.
“Don’t just ...”
Too late. The handle creaked, the door groaning as it
shifted in its frame. It didn’t swing open like doors were
supposed to. Instead, it moved as though the bricks
around it were part of a larger mechanism, sliding back
into the wall with a deep, grinding noise. Dust and bits of
mortar fell as the door disappeared, leaving a gaping
archway where there had only been solid brick before.
Alex’s breath caught in his throat. Beyond the
archway was ... somewhere else. Not Camden. Not a
London alley. It was an entirely different place – poorly
lit and hidden in mist, with towering stone structures just
visible in the distance. The air that seeped out was cold,
damp, and thick with the smell of earth.
Ravi took a step back. “Alright, that’s not normal.”
“No kidding,” Alex breathed, his eyes locked on the
strange scene before him. He should’ve been scared. He
was scared. But there was something else, too. Something
pulling him forward. “We have to go in.”
Ravi blinked. “‘Have to?’ Nah, we don’t. I’ve changed
my mind; it looks creepy in there.”
“Yeah, Ravi,” Alex said, already inching closer to the
archway. “It’s not every day you find a door to another
world or wherever it leads, is it?”
Ravi opened his mouth to protest but clearly couldn’t
come up with a good argument. “I’ve got a bad feeling
about this,” he muttered, following Alex.
As they stepped closer to the opening, a faint glow
began to pulse from deep within the mist. Alex couldn’t
tell what it was, but it felt like it was waiting for them.
5His heart raced, a mixture of excitement and terror
building in his chest.
“Are we really going to do this?” Ravi whispered.
Alex glanced at him, grinning despite the knot in his
stomach. “What’s the worst that could happen?”
As if in answer, the mist swirled and the glowing light
grew brighter. Alex swallowed hard, his hand brushing
against the rough stone of the archway as he stepped
through.
And just like that, Camden was gone.
The world shifted the moment Alex’s foot crossed the
threshold. It wasn’t a dramatic change, not like stepping
off a cliff, but more like walking into a room where the
air was thicker, the light dimmer. The temperature
dropped, cool and crisp against his skin, and the ground
under his trainers felt different – softer, almost like
packed dirt instead of the hard pavement of Camden.
Ravi followed close behind, glancing over his
shoulder every two seconds as though the door might
slam shut on them at any moment. “This is mad. Proper
mad. You know that, right?”
Alex couldn’t argue with that. The mist was swirling
around them now, not so thick that they couldn’t see, but
just enough to blur the edges of whatever strange
landscape they had wandered into. Shapes loomed ahead
– tall, jagged structures that looked like stone towers, but
there was something off about them. They didn’t rise up
from the ground in neat lines like buildings should.
Instead, they seemed to twist and lean, as though they’d
grown out of the earth at strange angles.
Alex’s pulse quickened as they moved forward, the
faint glow still shimmering in the distance. Every instinct
told him that whatever was causing that light, it was
6important. He could feel it pulling him deeper into this
strange new world.
“What the hell is this place …?” Ravi’s voice wobbled
slightly as he glanced around. “Like some kind of hidden
park? Or a secret garden or something?”
Alex shook his head, though he wasn’t sure why. “I
don’t think we’re in Camden anymore, bruv.”
“No crap, Sherlock,” Ravi uttered, kicking at the
ground, sending a small puff of dust into the air. “Where
do you think we are, then? The underground? Or some
kind of ancient ... cave? Because if there are mole people
in here, I’m out. I ain’t down with messing with no mole
people.”
Alex ignored the mole people comment, his attention
drawn to the strange structures looming in the mist. He
couldn’t explain it, but there was something familiar
about this place. Not familiar in the sense that he’d been
here before, but more like he’d seen it somewhere – in a
dream, or maybe a story he’d read a long time ago. It was
the kind of place that felt like it shouldn’t exist, but
somehow did, just beneath the surface of reality.
They continued walking, their footsteps soft on the
strange, spongy ground. The glow grew brighter with
each step, and soon they found themselves standing
before what looked like a massive stone archway, carved
with delicate designs that wound their way up the pillars
like vines. In the centre of the arch, hovering just above
the ground, was a glowing orb made of pure light. It
pulsed softly, casting an eerie glow over the surrounding
stones.
Alex’s breath caught in his throat. “What is that?”
Ravi stepped closer, squinting at the orb. “Looks like
some kind of … beacon? Or maybe a lightbulb from the
7Stone Age, like when the Flintstones were around?”
Alex was about to respond to Ravi’s ridiculous
comment when the light flickered, and for the briefest of
moments, the air around them shimmered. He blinked,
and suddenly, the mist parted, revealing more of the
landscape beyond. What he saw made his heart stop.
Stretching out in all directions were more of the
strange stone structures, but now Alex could see them
clearly. They weren’t random formations; they were
buildings. Ancient, crumbling, and half-buried in the
ground, but unmistakably buildings. Towers, domes,
bridges – all connected by twisting stone pathways that
led their way through the mist.
“This … this isn’t just some hidden place,” Alex
murmured, his voice barely above a whisper. “It’s a
whole city.”
Ravi let out a low whistle. “A city? Here? Under
Camden? That’s ... that’s mental!”
Alex didn’t reply. His gaze was fixed on the glowing
orb, which pulsed again, sending another wave of energy
through the air. There was something about it –
something powerful, something alive. He took a cautious
step forward, reaching out instinctively.
“Uh, maybe don’t touch that?” Ravi’s voice was high-
pitched, like it always got when he was on the verge of
freaking out.
But Alex couldn’t help himself. His hand hovered
over the orb, and as he got closer, he felt a strange
warmth radiating from it. Not the kind of warmth you’d
get from a fire or the sun, but something deeper,
something that settled in his chest and made his skin
tingle.
The moment his fingers brushed the surface of the orb,
8a rush of energy surged through him. His vision blurred,
and for a split second, he wasn’t standing in front of an
ancient city. He was somewhere else – somewhere dark
and cold, with stone walls pressing in on all sides.
Shadows moved at the edge of his vision, and he could
hear faint whispers, like voices calling to him from far
away.
Then, just as quickly as it had happened, the vision
vanished. Alex stumbled back, his heart racing.
“Alex!” Ravi grabbed his arm, pulling him away from
the orb. “Are you alright? What happened?”
Alex shook his head, trying to clear the fog from his
mind. “I ... I don’t know. I saw something. Like …
another place. It was dark, and there were these voices
…”
Ravi looked at him like he’d lost it. “Voices? Bruv, we
need to get out of here. Now!”
Alex wanted to agree, but something inside him said
they couldn’t leave just yet. Not without knowing more.
“I think the orb is connected to the door?” he said,
glancing back at it glowing. “I think … this place is part
of something much bigger?”
Ravi’s face paled. “Even bigger than a secret city
under Camden? Or if we discovered mole people?”
Alex shot him a look. “I’m serious. There’s something
here – something important. This city is … hidden for a
reason, and it feels really important. And Ravi, I don’t
think there are mole people here.”
The air suddenly felt heavy, as though it held secrets
waiting to be whispered. Without warning, the stillness
was broken by a sound – soft and beautiful. A voice,
unmistakably female, echoed through the empty city,
seeming to come from everywhere and nowhere all at
9once. It was melodic and mysterious, each note lingering
in the air as though carried by an unseen wind.
The voice began to sing, its words forming a cryptic
riddle:
When the Veil grows thin and the darkness spreads,
Seek the light where old paths tread.
Through realms of magic, the answers hide,
In distant lands where Gatekeepers bide.
Only those with courage to see,
Shall find the key to set them free.
The ancient Portal waits with power untold,
Guarded by riddles, secrets, and gold.
To save the realms, the chosen must stand,
With wisdom and fire, the fate in their hand.
The song faded, leaving the city once again in silence,
the beautiful melody lingering in the cold air like a
forgotten dream.
Ravi’s eyes widened as he frantically scanned the
empty streets, as if trying to pinpoint where the
mysterious voice had come from. “What the heck was
that?” he stammered, his face pale. “Please tell me I
wasn’t the only one who just heard that!”
Alex, equally shaken, nodded slowly, his heart
pounding in his chest. “Yeah ... I heard it too. But what
does it mean?”
“‘When the Veil grows thin ...’” Ravi muttered, his
voice trailing off as he nervously glanced around. “Isn’t
that something brides wear? What’s a Gatekeeper? And
what’s a portal supposed to be?”
Alex shook his head, trying to make sense of the
cryptic message. “I don’t know. But whatever it is, it’s
10got to be important. Nothing in this place feels random.
And I don’t think it means that type of veil.”
Ravi let out a frustrated groan, running his hand
through his hair. “Great. So now we’ve got creepy,
disembodied ghost voices singing riddles and talking
about magic keys ... Can this get any stranger?”
Alex forced a smile, but deep down, he shared Ravi’s
unease. “Honestly, I’m starting to think it can.”
They both stood there, staring out at the ancient city,
the weight of the mystery pressing down on them.
Neither of them knew what the riddle meant. But one
thing was clear: their journey was only just beginning,
and whatever lay ahead was far more dangerous – and far
more significant – than they had ever imagined.
As the last echo of the melodic voice faded into the
eerie silence of the ancient city, Alex and Ravi stood
frozen, wide-eyed, trying to make sense of the cryptic
riddle. The orb of light that had once been their only
company flickered and vanished, leaving them in a thick,
suffocating quiet.
“I ... have no idea what that means,” Ravi finally
muttered, his voice barely more than a whisper.
“Me neither,” Alex replied, swallowing hard.
Suddenly, the atmosphere shifted. The air grew cold,
unnaturally so, and a low, resonating buzz began to rise
from the very stones beneath their feet. Before either of
them could react, a new voice filled the air – this one
darker, more chilling, like whispers carried on the wind.
It began as a quiet hiss, but soon it grew louder, filling
the empty city with a dreadful, terrifying sound as a loud
gruff voice began screaming:
Only fools tread where shadows fall,
11The path of darkness beckons all.
For those who seek the twisted way,
Will find their souls begin to fray.
Beware the portal of lies and sin,
For none return from realms within.
Turn back, ye lost, the end is nigh,
Pursue the dark, and you shall die.
As the final word rang out, the ground beneath them
trembled violently, the ancient stone streets shifting and
cracking like brittle bones under their feet. Massive
buildings, once imposing and solid, began to groan and
shake as if the city itself was coming alive – angry,
restless, ready to devour anything in its path.
Ravi’s eyes widened in sheer terror as he glanced at
Alex. “Tell me that was just the wind!”
But Alex didn’t respond. His mind raced as the city
trembled, the sense of foreboding rising like a wave
threatening to drown them. The ominous warning hung
heavy in the air, and for the first time, Alex understood
that not all riddles offered guidance – some offered dire
warnings.
Without hesitation, Alex grabbed Ravi’s arm. “We
need to go. Now!”
The city shook again, more violently this time. Stone
structures crumbled around them, sending dust and debris
raining from the sky. The ground beneath their feet began
to shake like a giant stirring from deep within the earth,
the tremors growing stronger with each passing second. It
was as if the entire city had suddenly come alive,
protesting their presence. Dust and loose stones rattled
from the ancient buildings around them, creating an eerie
chorus that sent a chill down Alex’s spine.
12“We’re going to get crushed!” Ravi shouted, his voice
laced with panic as he stumbled forward, keeping pace
with Alex. “I think the ghost is trying to kill us?!”
They ran, their footsteps echoing loudly through the
desolate streets. The beautiful, eerie calm of the city had
transformed into a nightmarish maze, as if the very place
wanted to swallow them whole.
The dark voice, though silent now, lingered in the air
like a curse.
“Faster!” Alex yelled, barely dodging a massive stone
column that came crashing down, its impact sending a
shockwave that nearly knocked them off their feet.
Ravi’s breath came in sharp gasps, panic rising in his
chest. “I didn’t sign up for this! Curiosity is going to get
us killed!”
They turned a corner, the ancient door in sight, but the
shaking only intensified. The entire city seemed to be
collapsing around them, and for a brief moment, Alex
wondered if they would even make it out. But as they
went through the door, the tremors suddenly stopped.
Panting and covered in dust, they skidded to a halt in
the alleyway. Alex exchanged a glance with Ravi, both of
them trying to process what had just happened.
“We ... we made it,” Ravi gasped, bending over to
catch his breath.
“Yes,” Alex said, eyes full of relief that they’d made it
out. “Someone is trying to warn off those that pursue a
dark path.”
“Someone? That was definitely something,” Ravi said,
still shaking. He looked back at the door with a frown,
then turned to Alex. “Please tell me we’re never going
back in there again!”
Alex didn’t answer. He didn’t know if they’d be back,
13but one thing was clear: there were forces at play far
beyond what they had imagined, and the path ahead was
going to be even more dangerous than they’d thought.
*
Later that night, Alex lay in bed, staring up at the ceiling,
his mind consumed by the riddle. The words echoed over
and over in his head, each line more cryptic than the last.
What did it all mean? The Veil, the key, Gatekeepers – it
was like something out of a fantasy book, yet the voice
made it feel all too real.
Unable to shake the feeling, he grabbed his phone and
began scouring the internet for answers. He searched for
anything that could help him understand the strange city,
the voice, or the riddle. He typed in ‘ancient doors’ and
scrolled through images of old, weathered wooden doors,
some carved with elaborate designs. But none of them
resembled the door they had passed through. It was as if
the door they’d found in Camden was in a class of its
own – something entirely different.
Then he tried ‘portals,’ hoping for a breakthrough.
What he found were pages upon pages of science fiction
articles and mythological references – portals to other
dimensions, time-travel theories, old legends. None of it
felt right. It all seemed like nonsense compared to what
they had seen.
“What’s the Veil?” he muttered to himself, typing the
phrase into the search bar. More obscure stories and
strange tales appeared, some referencing veils between
worlds, spiritual boundaries, but nothing concrete.
Nothing that could explain what he and Ravi had
experienced.
“Gatekeepers?” Alex tried, hoping for something. But
again, what came up were mythological guardians, vague
14references to spirits guarding the boundaries of the
afterlife. None of it felt connected to what they had
witnessed in that ancient, crumbling city.
Frustration gnawed at him as he threw his phone onto
the bed and rubbed his eyes. He sat up, glancing around
his room, feeling more restless than ever. “What does it
all mean?” he whispered. The internet wasn’t helping.
There were no answers there. He was grasping at straws,
trying to make sense of something that seemed
impossible to explain.
The Veil … a key … Gatekeepers … Alex stared out
of his window into the night, his mind racing. Whatever
the riddle meant, whatever this ‘Veil’ was, it was clear
now that he and Ravi were part of something far bigger
than they had imagined. And no matter how many
websites he scoured, the answers weren’t going to be
found in the familiar world he knew.
If you made it this far, thank you for reading. Let me know what you think—first impressions, favourite moments, or any thoughts you have. I’d love to hear them.
Chapter two is where things start to get interesting. Hope to see you there.