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  Look at this its so badly written, sure the boy has a story to tell be come on!!, when he told me he would write his story I was exited as it would be entertaining but this is just bad writing.

  look at chapter two that is the peak of s**ty writing something important happened and he didn’t elaborate things, he wanted to write this story but d**m is he a bad writer.

  The narrative has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.

  Worst of all he doesn’t censor his swear words , he don’t even think of the children who will read this ,such an irresponsible person .

  so good news for the few of you who read this I will be taking over, don’t worry about who I am just enjoy the story .

  for my convenience and to make story easier to write I will name the boy Cain as I cant use his real name .

  yes like THE Cain anyways ,

  Lets continue .

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