This is a repost from webo avoid losing anything should something happen there.
Every yon/bck hole in logic, bad writing, shifts in writing, (A/... nothing ged.
My writing started while drunk ba November/December after finishing Are season 2, and I've made every mistake an intro writer could make in this piece. Including trying to use ChatGPT to fix grammar/senteructure during the initial chapters too much. Pretty much every criticism about this story has already been made lol.
Edit: Also includes lore from vergence - league of legends story