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20.1 Another idea wall-bounce chapter

  Hi guys, its me again, the creator of this world. Aka Slime guy author

  Work at my job this week gave me plenty of time to think over the story as written so far. Honestly, I like it, and see the set ups coming together nicely. On the other hand, like the most recent review said, it is a bit of a slow burn huh? Ironic, considering my first edit round decreased the pacing speed, but I actually do agree here. Alongside that, the observation that the other characters don't pop up much besides Emily- this is a part of inspired writing rather than planned writing.

  I'm a visual guy, so writing all this down helps focus my attention on what needs to be done, and I hope it keeps you all informed on what I plan and how I plan to do it. I as always welcome your feedback as I get to work on all this. Given the nature of what needs to be done, I expect I'll be doing some significant editing that will result in a longer and better story than I already I have, since that's how it always goes for me. I expect I'll be adding 1.5x words if not 2x, and that will include parts I outright delete. I won't bug you guys with more than 1 update chapter before I start publishing new chapters again, so look forward to it.

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