This is my first story and I hope you all are pleased with what I wrote. This story is about a frail boy with a weak body and strong will. He suffers from his sister''''s constant bulling and disownment. All he ever wanted was a stronger body so he could protect himself and those he cared for. His fantasies of strength continue until a disembodied voice asks him a question. Statistics Overall Score .star-5562-overall-94448c6364d44dbb806f3543ef00b5f4:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 5,615 Average Views : 1,123 Followers : 5 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 11 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Support the author''''s work via PayPal Tip on PayPal Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author