A creative writing that derived from a short poem, so this is just a short story based somewhat on a poem. Follow David and Lucy on a journey to discover the source of the strange rumors within the ruin of the ancient kingdom Nettle.___First FictionIt''''s a short story with the intention to test the waterLike seeing if the stone will float when thrown into the lakePlease state everything that you see and suggest any improvements,___________________________________Story is told by stage like scenarios...Don''''t read the poem until you finished the short story it kind of gives it away.http://www.fantasypoetrybyjongutmacher.com/the-creature/The Creature: copyright 2011 by jon gutmacher Statistics Overall Score .star-2779-overall-489938c2e84041adb0886050c9e605ea:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 937 Average Views : 937 Followers : 2 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 10 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author The Cat Sage